| "A Grim's Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 118 ] |
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Reviewed By: skyfox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 15:08 CST
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Is harry a wolf? or maybe he's a bear. bear is what comes to mind after wolf, and wolf is more or lese already used. So I'll gess twice! he's either a wolf or a bear. Thats what I think! thanks again! chow muncher!^-^
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Reviewed By: skyfox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(WARNING:I am a bad speller)Hi! I love your story, it's so well done, updated often, etc. GOOD JOB!I wanted to add a point for kurama being the teacher. Not only is there the factor of being academicaly prepared to teach, *cough*kurama*cough*, *hem* but is said teacher able to deal with the students? I don't think kuwabara could do that well.You know, he tends to jump at anyone that insults him. and he can't hurt girls, its against his honor code. He would have a hard a time dealing with the slythirins;always tackling the guys and the girls probably might take advantage of his honor code, and make fun of him. Kurama is much better at dealing with people and would do the best job preparing the students and diciplining the people that need it. Another + is that when(or if, im not the writer)Hermine and/or Ron(again, not author, do they become friends again or does he go to *pulls out flashlight* ThE dArK sIdE? MWAHAHAHA! *ahem* *puts flashlight back* moving on.)find out about harry's stay in japan, or more pointed, his new 'talent' with plants, they can meet harrys teacher! So, though it would be entertaining for kuwabara and yusuke to be fighting eachother every other day(or every)during the school year or class; I think it would be better for the story if kurama went. PWEASE?!thank you for making such a good story,and if your muse abandons you, you can turn to your beloved *snickering*...*"bangs" and "booms!" sound in backround + occasional scream*...readers! ^_^ thank you!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 12:49 CST
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Hi, I'm not good on ideas or thoughts, I'll just leave all that good stuff to you. Update soon again, cuz I'l like you to. I'm trying to say stuff without sounding mean. Somhow whenever I try to be nice, it comes out insulting. so, once again, update again soon please. This has been Kuramas Gurl, thank you, goodbye.
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Reviewed By: Firefly_of_death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 12:46 CST
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I liked it. Very good. It was also funny in some parts. bye Firefly
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 11:43 CST
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Nothing like puttin' stuff in writing to keep it secret. I hope Harry has the sense to leave his journal at home. I'm also wondering how this new knowledge will affect Harry's classroom behavior in DADA if the teacher, assuming it isn't one of our guys, starts talking out of his ass about demons.
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh ^_^ On: January 30, 2005 11:39 CST
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I just realized I'm the first reviewer for this story! Awesome!!!
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Reviewed By: kuramafan58 ^_^ On: January 30, 2005 11:38 CST
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When are they gonna get to Hogwarts? I really, really want to see everyone's reactions if Yusuke and/or co. show up. PLEASE GET THEM TO HOGWARTS SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: IDefineStrange [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 11:25 CST
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Excellent story. I was thinking of something along the lines; but Harry was a half-demon in mine... And I'm voting for fox. But that's just 'cause of how I think of Harry.
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Reviewed By: calikocat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 08:41 CST
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*snickers* Koenma in a hoopskirt! *falls out of chair laughing* That's great! And yeah, Harry is definetly bright enough to figure it out. He's no Hermione, but he's not a Yusuke or Kuwabara either. ^_^ Later.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 01:55 CST
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*has basically fallen over in dismay at the spelling errors in her review* Agh... I can't boast good spelling anymore... ignore these reviews, I meant yours, not ygours... or somethin' like that. You know what I mean! ...I think...
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 01:54 CST
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Not fix! FOX! f-o-x! THis shows how tired I am... or it just proves that I need to proof-read more...
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 01:53 CST
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Harry? I'd say a dog, but in this story it seems to be veering towards a fix... arg... for all I know you could choose to spite us all and laugh at our reviews if you suddenly decide a koala Harry would be a nice touch. Thanks for that!Now that I have the faintest idea of who's who, I'll continue readin' as soon as you have the next chapter up... Ah, this is basically one of the stories that makes me jump for joy whenever I see the message 'Grim's Promise has been updated! Dance and celebrate as subliminal messages are transferred to ygour brain!' Well, the last part isn't true... or maybe it is... I've had odd urge to buy cinnamon rolls lately... Heh, yeah... late-night humor... in it's worst form. 'night!
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Reviewed By: Kat_Sakura On: January 22, 2005 01:52 CST
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plz update soon..... i really want to know what happens next!!!^^
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven(not logged in) On: January 21, 2005 14:52 CST
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the amagius(sp) question is easy...a Black fox with green eyes and the obvious scar on his forehead and the fur on his head is mused
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Reviewed By: grapejellybean [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 13:50 CST
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Wonderful story. You are doing a wonderful job of weaving the two stories together. Keep up the great work and update soon.
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