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| "A Grim's Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 118 ] | | Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] | Reviewed By: calikocat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 09:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hana reminds me of my sister's cat Magic. She's part Maine Coon and loves to play in water. That and she's very vocal. ^_^; But enough of that. I shall look around for a site about foxes, and if I find anything I'll let you know. And here's another guess regarding Harry's animagi form. A black panther maybe? Sleek, powerful, crafty... Am I close? Kurama probably would be the best candidate for proffessor. But then I'd love to see Yusuke sent over seas. And as far couples, I have a picture of Yusuke and Harry stuck in my head that won't go away. *sighs* Stupid imagination is taking over again. But I loved your 'filler' chapter. It was great. Until next time.
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 07:52 CST
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Now you've teased me and I am all distracted by something that probably isn't even germane to the story. I'm wondering which Higurashi is working with Keiko and Kuwabara on the bio-chem project. You will probably never reveal who but I am hoping that Mama Higurashi has gone back to school. The scene with Liam and Hana was very cute. Considering he has lived his entire life with used pillows, whether from the Dursleys or the dorm, I am surprised Harry is so picky about his pillow. I don't remeber him being so choosey about his clothing. The scene with Liam and Hana was very cute and the chapter was as njoyable as usual.
| Reviewed By: holyllama On: February 02, 2005 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the better, if not one of the best, fanfics that I've read. You've done a wonderful job of keeping each character very much in character, along with combining two "worlds" that had seemed to me to be too disparate to write well with without resorting to cliches (if that made any sense whatsoever). Not to mention the fact that a lot of the stuff you've come up with has had me rolling around in stitches. Keep up the great work! (I gotta take a stab at it, is Harry's animagus form some type of cat?) :)
| Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man is harry brave, i wouldn't do that to kurama. confound it all, i love it though. i love where black is, nothing like a little blackmail
| Reviewed By: whirleeq(not logged in) On: January 31, 2005 21:18 CST
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Oh how funny for you to have Harry pull a Kagome with Kurama... You should totally have someone illustrate that scene :)
| Reviewed By: skyfox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 19:05 CST
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YAYAYAYAYAY! HAPPYNESS!i didnt know you would update so soon! GOOD JOB! *hands author coupon* I dont know what its for, but its the thought that counts! I LOVE the part when harry pets kurama's ears! yes, harry is the only one bold enough to do it! but its even cuter that kurama suspected it, and let him do it anyways! HEHE.-MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!-ahem. also, I remember about the romance ideas and stuff. PLEASE DONT ADD ANY! its great the way it is in that aspect. I have felt that alot of possibly good yyh/hp x-overs, (not to mention fics in general) that have gone down the drain, so to say, because they added some pairings that, just turned the whole story upside down and inside out, just wrong. I love this one to much to be ruined by such a thing! thank you, and cant wait til you update again. ^_^ ja ne!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 17:33 CST
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I almost feel sorry for Youko... except this is far too funny too feel sorry for him. Sirius is right, only Harry would do that... Yukina with a camera... Koenma spying... this is amusing. He's never going too live that down, is he? Thanks for the fast update! I was sort of surprised, but I was so happy when I saw you had updated... I had the urge too hug the next person I saw. So, when are the pranks going to start again? Well... they probably have been doing them but you're just not really telling them... at least Harry hasn't done any major pranks in a while. You know... Kurama's his teacher right? What happens if Harry pulls a prank on him? After-all... Anyways! Why does Harry keep calling Kurama Shuichi? Doesn't he know his non-human name yet?
| Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 16:13 CST
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Poor Kurama, is everyone out to get him with this one? Ah, oh well. So, update again soon please. Harry is toatally clueless to what he just did, huh? Well this has been Kuramas Gurl, thank you, goodbye
| Reviewed By: calikocat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well, that was fast! I didn't expect you to update so soon! Yay! Yusuke is doing better, let's just hope the couch doesn't die. And I about died laughing when I realized what Harry wanted to do to Kurama! *snickers* And Yukina got a picture of it! Yes, that would be wonderful blackmail! Good job on the chapter, it lifted my spirits. Until next time.
| Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 14:20 CST
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Eh heh heh heh... Forget my last comment. I forgot there are multiple pages... *bows so low she hits her head on the floor* Oww.... Uhhh, anyway, Love the story!
| Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 13:52 CST
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well i guess that prooves that its universal to pet fuzzy ears sticking out of ones head...people do it to me and my friends when we are wearing our cat/dog/fox eared headbands.
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Reviewed By: whirleeq [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 00:19 CST
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I so agree that the Jagan is cute. Hell, Hiei is cute, period. :) This was a great and really funny chapter. I like the way Harry took everything in stride. It's also amusing how you're going to have him work with Kurama -- that's a surprise. Personally, I would think his 'inner talent' would be something much darker and possibly reptile oriented because of his association with voldie. I was really thinking you were going to pair him up with Hiei as a tutor, so Kurama is a major twist. Overall, this fic is excellent and one of the best YYH/HP crossovers I've ever read. Regarding romantic pairings - don't let anyone push you into adding them; this fic is doing well enough as it is without 'gratuitous snogging', unless you can work it into the plot so it's not incidental. Too many authors put in the pairings 'just because they can'.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 21:11 CST
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Hey! It so is! At least to me... I'm basically obsessed with spelling and the sort. Okay... obsessed isn't the correct word, I just like words... and it feels like I'm abusing them when I misspell them. We all have our weird aspects. The Jagan is cute! I know a few people who agree to this observation, myself included. That must've been a major ego killer for Hiei... ah well! Who knows? Except Hiei that is... I notice some tension between Kurama and Harry, what's to come of this?
| Reviewed By: calikocat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 18:17 CST
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Yay! Another chapter! I wonder what Harry is gonna do to Yusuke and Kurama? And as for Harry's Animagi form... I'm thinking Lion, because of his house. Or maybe a snake. Ooo! What if he turned into a basilisk? A Fox would be cool, he could be a blue/black fox. They're pretty rare but they do exist. Later!
| Reviewed By: skyfox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 15:19 CST
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GUH! I feel typie! I promise this is the last one!-uh, that is, until you update. bear because he seems to be more spiritually aware, strong and forward thinker. A wolf, well the pranks would point to fox, but I dont think he's fox. He just doesnt really feel like one, I cant explain it. A wolf has a stronger and darker image than a fox. Harry doesnt have the same playfulness as a fox. He's more darkened and sad, like, a wolf howling to the moon, ya know? And harry seems to need companionship, alot more like wolf kind then a fox, thats more drifty. It hurt him deeply when ron betrayed him, but i think a fox would go kill ron or something for that. Harry isnt going to do that,...most likely...right?so yah, NOW I say ta ta for now! chow muncher! :)
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