| "A Grim's Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 118 ] |
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Reviewed By: dazesky On: February 22, 2005 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! you updated!!! i've been waiting almost forever for you to update! i haven't been able to write reviews for this, i don't think, but i am now! i loved your Hana and Liam adventure, lol. i think you should do an entier series about their own little adventures, lol. that would be cute. hey, why was kurama so upset that harry knew his age? also, can't wait to see what you have in store for hiei and kuwa! this will be so funny! can't wait to read your next chapie! ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: ManaChan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 16:39 CST
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Hhhmmmmm........ A stag like James? or a tiger maybe? You know, for Lilly? XD hum de dum... I really don't have a clue... *stratches head and thinks for a moment* I bet that once its revealed, it'll be one of though "Duh, why didn't I think of that before" animals. lol. XD
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Reviewed By: FoxylilRaven:not signed in On: February 22, 2005 15:02 CST
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hmmm coytye maybe or a wolf
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Reviewed By: InuMiko(not logged in) On: February 22, 2005 14:53 CST
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*Groan* While I truly, truly, love this story, if you are going to do a slash romantic pairing, my arguement is that YOU SHOULD KEEP HARRY OUT OF IT. Honestly. I mean, 1) he's pretty much a KID compared to the rest of the group, 2) he currently has an evil wizard out for his head, and I seriously doubt so soon after sirius's death that he'd let someone become romantically close with him, and 3) there has been absolutely nothing in canon so far that would even hint that his attentions go that way. Cho Chang ring any bells? If you feel the absolute need to throw some slash in there, pair up hiei/kurama or yusuke/kurama or even yusuke/hiei. That, to me is much more plausable. Again, this is just my opinion; you write what you want -- it's your baby, after all. I would just hate to see you ruin a good story because people are clamoring for a 'pairing'.
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Reviewed By: ManaChan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Does the my first review/comment on MM.org dance* ^_^ Heehee. This is brilliant. Your orignality and creativity are excellent! I have no idea how you thought up this fic. As for Harry's animal? o_o I honestly have no clue what to guess... Ehehehe, a lion? XD
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
harry's animal, a dog maybe? anyways update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ti-chan On: February 16, 2005 17:48 CST
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Teee! I love this fic and your writing style, I've really gotten into this fic. hmm... and about Harry's animal... I'm going to go with a fox, just because that's what kind of ears and tail Yusuke gave him earlyer and I tend to over think things.
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Reviewed By: Kat_315 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 02:07 CST
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great chapie... plz update soon...!!!^^
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 01:38 CST
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This is a really good fic! REALLY good! And I like the bits and pieses of InuYasha you sneak in the fic!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 22:30 CST
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Oh yeah! I forgot to mention, but I take it your sort of adding Kagome in this, right? You mentioned a 'Higurashi' and Liam... have you by chance read any books by Tamora Pierce? Just curious. For a filler chapter, I liked it, it gave us a look at what they do with their time!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 22:28 CST
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I don't read the review responses you give to other people... I'd feel totally lost, as I have no clue what you're talking 'bout. It makes sense, about the whole Shuichi/Kurama thing. I almost feel sorry for Harry, though I can't say I really do... He did touch Youko's ears... What will Hiei's reaction be when he see's the pictures? This I'm curious to know! ^.^
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Title: shakeval Mazuko of Chaos
Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 21:33 CST
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this is actually a pretty good story and i think you should keep writing. i can't wait to read what happens when the people at hogwarts find out harry has been studying illegal books and subjects not approved of by the ministry i would also think it would be funny if harry brot over some makai plants and they snared/attacked/trapped malfoy when he tries to snoop around harry's room. and harry using lots of magic without a wand to the surprise of many. overall a good story keep writing your good at this.
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Reviewed By: FoxylilRaven(not logged in) On: February 05, 2005 17:04 CST
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i still say that Harry is a Kitsune(the animal NOT youkai or spirit one tail not multiple) and seems Laim(sp) is taking on sort of Harry's persona aswell
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 17:01 CST
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Kurama's not evil, he's just misunderstood. I like this chapter, so update again soon. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Reviewed By: whirleeq(not logged in) On: February 05, 2005 16:08 CST
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Are you bringing in IY characters???? Hope not, this fic is complex enough with just the two universes~ :). Very good chapter - love the acid spitting thing. You have got kurama down pat.
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