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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! you've updated! *jumps around the house like a crazy person* YAY! it was a GREAT chapter! inuyasha had that kimono MADE for kagome? awwwwwwwww that's so sweet! he IS going to be at the wedding right? I hope so, I can't wait to see(or read about) the look on his face when he sees her in it. yeah inuyasha's potty mouth was better in this one, don't get me wrong I know he says bad stuff a lot but i thought it was just a little much last time.(god forbid that he ever get's drunk)I can't wait to see what happens with houjou and eri(sorry if there spelled wrong, I have yet to use them in one of my fics)I think they'd make a cute couple ^_^ PLEASE update again soon! I REALLY want to know what happens with inuyasha and kagome. I'll give you a cookie if you update within the next.........week and a half k? bubye! Much love Dark Angel Of Love
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was very happy to see that you added a new chapter, I love your writing style!! I like the way Inuyasha finds out about her feelings & i really like the idea he doesn't go confessing his love for her followed by a lemon. His reaction was much more in character for him. I hope it doesn't take as long for the next update. (but if it must take that long for the quality i will wait with little complaning)
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Title: Oh! Thank You!!
Reviewed By: ErehwonDreamer3013 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you very much for mentioning me in your fic! Please keep updating this! I absolutely loooove the storyline so far! I'm stewing in anticipation; I can't wait to see what's next!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666(not logged on) On: January 19, 2005 22:23 CST
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Why wouldn't stay with it? it is really good so far. I like it, I like it. The kimono thing is so sweet and beautiful....
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Reviewed By: libraflyter On: January 19, 2005 14:56 CST
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Wow, you've covered a lot of emotional ground here. I really want to read the aftermath of this conversation ^_^
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 23:21 CST
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I really like this fic so far. PLEASE UPDATE!! it is soooo cool!!!
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Title: What a wonderful surprise!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 16:46 CST
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Sueric sent me a link to read your Come Here Boy and what a pleasent surprise I got when there was more to read from you. Your style and voice, if you will, are very easy and enjoyable to read. The emotional depth you go into shows a well-rounded understanding of the human psyche and makes your characterization more realistic. I hope you will consider continuing this fic and update sometime soon. This is a great start and I suspect it will be an extremely enjoyable read as well as a wonderful learning experience for you. Hoping to read more ~angelica
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 00:57 CST
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This was a very good start. I think you should definitely continue. ---- What a way for InuYasha to find out how Kagome feels about him...evesdropping! And upon hearing how strongly she feels, his remorse over every time he had inadvertantly hurt her in the past was agonizing. His sudden determination to fix things is just like him. His overconfidence is just one of the many traits that make us love our doggie-boy so much. ---- I have to wonder where he is off to...maybe to resolve things with Kikyo. --- Nice chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kagome0820 On: December 05, 2004 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya im a really big fan of all your fics and this is one of the best ones yet! Your an amzing writer and i really hope you update soon!I have absolutely no complaints to give you since its all so well done and i really really hope you update soon and dont keep us waiting! Im a big Inu/Kag fan and i already love this fic! Dont ever stop writing and update soon please! -Kagome0820 ^ ^
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
moremoremore! It's very good
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Title: More!!!!!
Reviewed By: Chio On: November 26, 2004 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It´s a nice first chapter...continue please. I put it in my favorites.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such awesome writing, and you've really gone in-depth with the whole inu/Kag relationship.. I love it!! Please add your new chap soon. I can't wait to read it!!!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woah... You need to update! This story is awesome! I was totally sucked in, the plot(as far as I can see) is solid, and that talk between Eri and Kagome was, oddly absorbing... Please don't keep a poor reader waiting! I also liked how you mixed in Inu's view with their's... You could really feel the emotions flying around...
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Reviewed By: Evangelion842 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest. I'm really impressed with your writing, it is of much better quality than the majority of fanfic writers. I really hope you continue this story. I can't really think of any criticism to give you, except maybe Eri's reaction to Kagome's explanation of Inuyasha was a little too calm, but I think that it was probably the best decision you could make for the flow of the story.
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Reviewed By: Raina1 On: November 23, 2004 00:18 CST
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Wow, this is a good beginning! All the thoughts and the emotions of the characters are so tangible. You've really put across Kagome's feelings very well and I like how you deepened her friendship with Eri. I have to agree with the other reviewers about the amount of times Inuyasha uses the f-word. He doesn't say it THAT much. But besides that minor little detail, I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
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