| "We Belong" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, if I was as good as you then I would have a TON of reviews! I absolutely LOVE this story! Inuyasha FINALLY knows how Kagome feels about him, and I had a felling that one of her friends had a thing for houjo, I just didn't know which one ^_^ but as much as I LOVE this story, don't you think that Inuyasha says 'fuck' alittle TOO much? well, anyway PLEASE update again soon! I'm dieing to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 07:57 CST
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Great start. As I've said before, I like your take on delving into the character's minds and feelings. I like the way you have Kagome convince Eri that Inuyasha is in a gang, its a good excuse! I'm eager to see how you blend your two works into this one. I'm sure it'll be excellent. Keep me updated!
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Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 05:23 CST
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This is my first review so I don't know about the 'Rating' thing. Anyways it was really good. I'm glad Eri likes Hojo, 'cause I always thought it made more sense that Kagome's friends like Hojo, but were being nice since Hojo expressed interest towards Kagome. I'm glad Inu-Yasha heard what Kagome said, he deserved a good dose of reality. I had half the mind to believe that once eri left he would 'jump' Kagome, and kiss her. But as I read your fic I realized how un-Inu-Yasha-like it would have been. What you wrote was perfect! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!! ~Na
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 23:42 CST
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WOW! I love it! You have no idea! You have to continue, please!!! I'm adding the story to my favorites! =D UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 21:02 CST
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Very good start! I look forward to reading more soon!
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Reviewed By: blackberry (not logged in) On: November 21, 2004 20:52 CST
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Promising start here. I like that you've delved into Kagome's neglected relationships on her own side of the well. (And now you've added another love triangle - Kagome-Houjo-Eri - to the rest of the polygons adorning Takahashi's story!) I hope you don't mind if I offer a small criticism: the number of F-bombs that Inu is dropping. He swears a lot, but I don't think he's THAT bad. ;) Looking forward to your next chapter.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: myanime [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is actually one of the best i have read, and i have read a lot of fics.
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Wow! So very, very good! I love it! You did an awesome job on it... I can't wait to read more! Usually when something like this is done it's so corny that I can barely stand to read it! That it not at all the case with this fic, a job well done, I say! I hooked, hooked I say! HOOK! I so can not wait for the next installment! I shall be cheeking for it every day, that's how eager I am for more... wonderful job! ~Zonza
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: ErehwonDreamer3013 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is nice so far! I really, really like it! But just what is Inuyasha going to do?? Is he going after Kikyo to finally send her to the Underworld?? Who knows! Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading your future chapters!
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