| "Dog Skin" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 22:48 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
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well done, though i did skim parts towards the end. did u know u'r only accepting member reviews? Grammar note: You must insert an apostrophe to indicate a contraction of "{noun} is", and possession - i noticed the following errors: girls scent , "That bastards gonna pay ; his mothers scent , lords arrival , every lords name . Tonikaku, i look fwd to the next chap, ja, mata!
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Title: Left you one on AFF too!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 21:17 EST
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This story is just excellent! Can't wait for the next chap.
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Title: wicked!
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 20:31 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chappy rocks! It seemed like forever since your last update, but this one was damn good! Please don't take so long to update. I personally don't mind if it takes authors time to update, but i was seriously beginning to wonder if you were ever going to update. Thanks for another wonderful chapter. Keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 19:11 EST
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I absolutely love this story--the quality of this chapter totally makes up for the long wait! But that doesn't mean I'm not impatient for the next one. :) Great job!
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Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 18:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!!! OMG! You must update soon before I... I don't know what I'll do, but I know I'll go crazy! PLEASE UPDATE! ~starlit333
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Title: Pretty Please!!!
Reviewed By: vmguppie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 20:30 EDT
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OK... it's been a month... Please update soon!!! pretty, pretty please with sugar on top???
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: October 03, 2005 00:09 EDT
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I feel bad for her. I know how it feels to want to tell somebody something but don't have the couarge to. Good story keep writing!
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Reviewed By: JULIIE On: October 02, 2005 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS LIKE BIN A MONTH SO UPDATE
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: September 13, 2005 19:51 EDT
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Still following and still enjoying this story very much. I can almost hear a voice in the background saying, "...and the plot thickens..." The poor girl, her deception just grows and grows. Now she's in a plot with InuYasha to fool Kouga into thinking she's taken and thus off-limits. Miroku is in league with Sesshoumaru and InuYasha, respectively...and with Sango. He must be keeping notes to make sure he doesn't tell the wrong person the wrong thing. Hehehe. Kagura is still playing smoke screen for Kagome, Sango is helping Kagome hide herself...plots within plots within plots. Could it get anymore complicated? Now, Naraku is about to arrive...speculation is rife about his preferrences for "entertainment"...and I have to wonder myself, considering how twisted and perverted he has become. --- Nicely done...almost Machiavelian.
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Reviewed By: Lee C On: September 12, 2005 18:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Vinessa On: September 12, 2005 18:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love It!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whitefire (not logged in) On: September 12, 2005 16:41 EDT
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TOTALLLY AWESOME CHPATER!!! i didnt find a lot fo errors, and i hope you have a fun trip back! canada is gfreat!
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Reviewed By: Rami-chan NSI On: September 12, 2005 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm so glad I found this! ^__^
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Reviewed By: neshee On: August 16, 2005 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story its great except for the parts when kagome dances in front of people because while i understand she wants to be able to do princess things again she is also very scared to let people know who she is so i think letting everyone see her is a big risk for her that she should not take. i do hope you continue to update and sango at least knows who she is or like you can make it so kagome tells part of her story like she tells sango her father tried to marry her and her molested her and thats why her father is dead to her and she ran away thenit could get back to inuyasha through miroku and he might leave her alone about her identity. but i am writing a novel length review so update soon. -ja ne
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Title: Can't wait!
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 08:39 EDT
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I can't wait for another chappie. I would of read this one sooner, but MM.org isn't sending updates anymore for whatever reason and I have all these stories in my favs and no one updates constantly so I've been slowly going down my list trying to find people who've updated. It's crazy! I really like your story and I really like the tension between Inuyasha and Kagome. I can't wait until he figures out what's going on. He'll really become protective of Kagome then. lol Or will he? Hehe. I can't wait to read what happens next!
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