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Reviewed By: Ebony Rain Fall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 16:29 EST
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i'm really enjoying this story so far. koga's one of my favorite characters so extra points for him! i like how you're writing it so far too. keep writing. i want toknow what happens next!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 20:42 EST
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An update! I'm so glad! Once again, I'm just utterly impressed by your way with words and descriptions. I really feel like I'm reading an actual published story...not just a fanfic! And I'm of course rooting for Inu-Kag. That's where I become a broken record. :) I have no comments really...just questions. Mostly rhetorical. :) So Naraku has gone entirely evil! I wonder how Kagura will get herself out of the predicament she's in...considering that she and Naraku are bound. I wonder to what extent they are bound. Can Naraku tell when Kagura lies? How far can he probe her thoughts? And I'm also wondering at Inuyasha's reaction towards Kags. He feels a reflexive sort of protectiveness for her. Will he question this...doesn't he wonder why? I know I do :) And then something that's from a few chapters ago...I guess I just wonder why Kagome waited that extra day before escaping. I mean, she already knew her father was beyond saving and that he would attempt to extract an even greater "reward"....why did she stay? Update soon. And I'll put another plea in for you to consider the one shot. Thanks for sending me the deviantart link....man, you are one talented lady!
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 17:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really like this fic. please updatre soon! its really awesome. i like your writing style, and dont let naraku get her!!! it's just too incest. poor kagome. well, ja, til next chapter!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: December 08, 2004 14:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was an interesting meeting. Does Kagome still have her bag? Cause it didn't say anything about her taking her bag from the tree. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: December 08, 2004 14:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was an interesting meeting. Does Kagome still have her bag? Cause it didn't say anything about her taking her bag from the tree. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: YangofYin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 11:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! She's escaped! I can't wait for the next chapt. Naraku is going to be pissed. I hope Kagura will be ok. Will she join Kagome in the Western Lands? I'm enjoying this very much. I like how you aren't rushing the plot. As much as I would love for her and Inu to get together faster, it's good you're making it more realistic. Will he ever refer to her name, or will he continue to call her the name he gave her? Will she tell him? Can't wait for next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Bobjobbob On: November 30, 2004 05:03 EST
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I always felt kinda sad for the dad in the fairytale version. But in this I feel kinda disgusted, imagine if they had kids! Shudder. Anyways this seems a bit more interesting.
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 20:58 EST
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Well...you weren't kidding about the story taking a turn for the dark. :) But it's interesting...most people thing of fairy tales as being innocent Disney like stories. The reality is that many of the folk tales that have been sanitized into the stories children get told at bed time started out much darker in content and symbolism. I read an interesting book about analyzing fairy tales a few years back...'twas authored by Bruno Bettelheim; opened my eyes to a few thing. Enough! :) As for your story, I'm enjoying it immensely! As with "Red Riding Haori" you have a wonderful set up with scenes. You've made Kagome's actions seem plausible despite the monstrous circumstances she's dealing with. Of course (and you could've guessed this), I'm curious as to how and when my beloved (ok..ok..Kagome's beloved) Inu will enter the picture. I also think it's interesting that you chose Kagura to be Kagome's ally and protector. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: drgn_mstrss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really like your fic. Please keep going. I very interseted in where this is headed.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: November 29, 2004 12:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap! Can't wait for the next chap! Kagura isn't going with Kagome is she?
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 01:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this so far! I'm a sucker for fairytales. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: montrith On: November 23, 2004 17:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only give 9 for originality since this IS based on a real fairytale, but fear not, I dont judge you for that, a great story so far!
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Reviewed By: Yang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 16:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was awesome!!! I was totally blown away when Naraku said his musume would be his wife. Great story, can't wait to see more. Is Sess the Lord, or his father? Can't wait for the next chapter, Ja!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: November 23, 2004 13:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just weird! But it was very interesting. Can you tell us what the paring will be? Is this going to be a Sesshomaru/Kagome paring?
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Reviewed By: Ducks On: November 23, 2004 08:20 EST
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OOO, I think I recongnise this story sorta. is it like that one where, and uh, you know...and they...augh....how to say it without possibly giving it away. There's one book out...and I think it had an animal on the cover and she was wearing white or something on a white forest background. Anyway's it seems to have the same basic concept. If you're going to do what I think is implied. Okay, I am making no sense even to myself. Going to shut up now. Good start. Update soon!
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