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| "Dog Skin" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: June 24, 2005 06:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww. hes so cute, inu was all over kagome. e_e i wonder what he was about to do when miroku was out of the room..? was he about to kiss her? o.o or maybe.. >>.. hm.. oh man, i love this story. ^_^ i love how the chapters are so long- and its just alike a fairy tale, i swear! it makes me feel young again.. wait.. i was never young. XD lol jk, i just never got told fairy tales.. ::cries:: poor deprived me.. ,,-_-,, but thank you for making it up to me. o.o ^__^ it means a lot to me. ^_^ please keep it up! ::goes on to next chapter happily::
| Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: June 24, 2005 05:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow! ^.^ so cool! kagome was brave to do that.. didn't she think some of the people would notice her in that crazy kimono? XD plus the fact she looks like kikyo.. they might have known kikyo, even if they didn't know her. o.o and if naraku starts asking around/spying.. >_> could be dangerous.....^_^ i love this story!!!
| Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: June 24, 2005 04:25 EDT
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oh wow! ^_^ i just read chapter four, i think, and i liked it a lot. e_e it makes me so excited.. and happy too. you're idea was so amazing, about the three kimonos, and the skin.. its like a fairytale.. it should be a fairy tale! o.o we should make it one. >_> i read fast, so i hope you update soon!
| Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(being lazy) On: June 23, 2005 23:48 EDT
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well here is a very tasty review for the good authress...great chapter. just lovely. hope you had fun on your trip, from the looks of you AU you did. update soon. ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: tanwe.... On: June 23, 2005 22:32 EDT
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well, awesome chapter!!! and, iuf naraku comes for her, recognizes her, gets sessh to give her back, will inuyasha be able to protect her then? or, will he finally find out who she is when naraku exposes her? or, will she accidently expose herself? (not in THAT way, you perv) or, will inuyasha do the unthinkable, and grow a brain, and then figure it out himself, confront her, and then she'll lie about it, and he'll know, and it'll all blow up in her face??? (breathes) whew, anyway, i hope you update soon! :3
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 13:28 EDT
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My, my...Hiten is quite nasty, isn't he? And Kouga is being persistant again, aggressivly so and InuYasha had to lay down the law. Now Kagome is daring to sneak down in disguise again while she's been ordered to stay put? I wish her luck. I wonder what her reaction will be when she finds out that Naraku is scheduled to arrive shortly. It won't be good, of that I'm sure of. Will she continue as a servent, hoping that her lowly status will keep her below his notice, or will she have the irresistable urge to run? I know she was hoping to gain Sesshoumaru's protection, but when fear kicks in...behavior becomes unpredictable. Well, we will see.
| Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 15:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really, really good. I like the way you ended it it with Hiten. I think it's really good on your part that you're leaving your readers in suspense, with them hanging on to every single word you're writing... making them stay on the edge of their seat until the next chapter. Please update soon, because I, myself, can't wait to see what happens next! ~starlit333
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whi... On: May 17, 2005 20:17 EDT
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Warning, the following review contains critism: AAAAAHHHH!!!! THE BAD SPELLING AND GRAMMAR!!! EEEEEEK!!!!! \>O
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Reviewed By: see title On: May 16, 2005 23:08 EDT
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yeah another chapter...i like how ...well i also like....actually i like it all. great chapter...please update asap...Zirra
| Reviewed By: spookeymelichan (not loged in ) On: April 13, 2005 01:51 EDT
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Great chapter as always I really love this tale it's one of the few fics I really look forward to updates for. I can't wait for inuyasha to figure out who she is and it will be interesting when naraku arrives. I am not big on AU fics but this story is riviting. Can't wait for the next update no matter how long it takes I will keep checking back. :)
| Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 22:40 EDT
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Great chap, update soon as posible, but like u said life is life and inspiration is inspiration, and neither seem to like to work with me either. :D Zirra
| Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire(not logged in) On: April 11, 2005 16:51 EDT
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yeah, life gets busy in nice weather. but, awesome chapter, and i hope kagome gets busted soon. it would be good. yup. oki, update soon please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion ( :p ) On: April 11, 2005 16:19 EDT
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Miroku is still holding his tongue about Inu-kegawa's appearance and InuYasha's curiousity is hightened by Kouga's continued inexplicable attraction for the dirty little servant girl. He's starting to put the pieces together but still doesn't know what the picture will be, charateristically losing his temper when thwarted by her simpleminded answer to, "...who are you?" Sesshoumaru is enjoying watching his brother fumble and is content to sit back and let the game play itself out. -- I am thourougly enjoying this tale. I completely understand about life happening...it's going around, hitting indescriminently like the flu. Great Chapter!
| Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 02:10 EDT
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ok, so im running out of things to say. soooo......i loved it, you write beautifully, this plot is amazing, and im sorry im so unoriginal today :) please update soon :)
| Reviewed By: Shaid (nlo) On: April 11, 2005 01:25 EDT
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NICE. Can't wait for more!!!
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