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Reviewed By: SpookeyMel-chan On: March 17, 2005 02:11 EST
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I really love this story it is one of the few IY fics I look forward to new chapters for. I really am really looking forward to when kagome's identaty gets out this is an interesting tale I hope you continue to write till you finish it there are too many fic out there were the author does not finish it. It's starting to get harder for kagome to keep who she is a secret. I figured Inuyasha would have to realise that she was not what she said she was when he started to clean her hand and could feel that there were not caluses. great story I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: reviewer =) On: March 11, 2005 22:48 EST
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I _really_ love this story.. I've never read the tale that you said it's based on, but it seems like you've developed it and formulated it just in the right way that it works just perfectly! It's very believable and everyone's very much in character. Congratulations in doing well in the IYFanguild contest! You really deserved it for a job well done on this story... Any idea how long it's going to end up being? hmm... well I just can't stop saying that I really love this story and the suspense and everything you've brought into it! I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for writing such a wonderful story, and I hope you update it soon!
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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 01:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story. I love how you've adapted this fairy-tale... you've managed to be true to both the story and the characters of Inuyasha, and still made it your own. Your writing is excellent too. Are you going to put Rin in this? I'd like to see that, though I'd understand if that would add too many complications.... Anyway keep up the good work, and update soon! Please!
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Reviewed By: drgn_mstrss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 22:03 EST
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Sweet! An update! Well, I hope Inuyasha figures it out soon. He can be so dense. Anyways, another great chapter, and keep it up!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 22:30 EST
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Hehe, Kagome is playing a deep game...one she almost hopes she loses. Now we know why Miroku has kept quiet about Inu-kegawa's appearance; Sesshoumaru's orders. Well, more is becoming clear...and we are still awaiting Naraku's arrival. -- Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: smg1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 21:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story. I vaguely remember the fairy tale, but i love your take on it. This fic is so different from most of the others i read. Update faster please! :)
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 21:07 EST
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oh no!!! is sesshomaru being evil again? darn!!! he's just too sexy for his own good...::sighs dramatically:: anyway... awesome chapter!!! really well writtin, and i dare say, it was a bit longer? kagome is gonna get bustred soon. really really REALLY soon. i can tell.. well, i hope ytou update soon! its a really good fic! thumbs up to you!
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Reviewed By: xxstarry_dreamzxx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 16:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe GREAT STORY!! i read ur other story too..i think its called Red Riding Haori or sumthing like that..great story too.. DIE NARAKU *stabs* haha sry..anyways...hope u update soon~^^
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire(not logged in) On: February 15, 2005 17:03 EST
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awesome chapter!!! not too many spelling mistakes. but, i sense a cinderella plot line coming in here. three balls, three dresses. inu falls for kagome, thinking she's kikyo, and then kagome gets busted. lotsa angst then a hapilly ever after. and then naraku (aka: theatre basement) is shot in the face. well, i still hope you updsate soon!^_^
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Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 16:31 EST
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Great story, and very well told. I really like the descriptions of Kagura's thoughts, and her reaction to seeing Kagome in the dance.
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Reviewed By: Phalon22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 15:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I really enjoyed this, okay so now Kouga grows a conscience. Let's hope Inuyasha can keep Naraku & Kouga away from Kagome now. :D
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 11:17 EST
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this is a great chapter, showing how kagome is adjusting to her knew life even though she can't forget the old, and just had to sneek a taste of an old happiness. :) great. Zirra
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Title: Ladylike ( Chapter 7 )
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 06:47 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
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grammar: 'fairing' should be 'faring'. doumo arigatou gozaimasu 4 updating *gives you a pat on the back* Well then, ja na!
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Reviewed By: SpookeyMel-chan On: February 15, 2005 04:52 EST
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YAY!!!! New chapter!!! Well done too this is a really enjoyable story can't wait for another chapter this is going to drive me nuts waiting :)
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: February 15, 2005 00:44 EST
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Whoa! Kagome sure took a big chance of exposing herself there. And Miroku is apparently sitting the fact that he knows 'who' she looks like. Now everone is getting curious about something. --- Hehe, I like how Sesshoumaru requested Kagura join in the dancing for the night's entertainment. (I love cannon pairings, and Kagura had definately been drawn to Sess...and visa versa.) I also love that Kouga vaguely remembers what he did with shame. He's a nice guy...just a bit too impulsive and tempermental. :P -- Well, I will await the next chapter with anticipation.
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