| "Rock My World" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 08:51 CST
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its good...too much spacing though....
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 15:39 CST
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oh yeah, very short chapter. it was interesting though, maybe b/c i love Kira's personality. it'a funny just reading about her & Namiko talking. i could imagine everything you wrote. so though it was short, it was still a good chapter. update soon! ja!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 11:25 CST
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woo hoo! i love this please up date soon!
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Title: yay! Well done!!!
Reviewed By: Kiri Hinomiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!! such an awesome fic!! i can't wait for more!! watch out for words forgotten, but other than that...wonderfull!!! this is the greatest *wonder to self* hm...i wonder if it's going to be a pairing between Kurama and Kira...that'd be cool, but then again, Hiei is cool too! ^.*< hahaha lolz sorry just me musing....okeis on to he next chapter the ratings and other stuff will stay the same until i reveiw again and change them
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 20:19 CST
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Ah! Fluff! Gotta love the fluff! Okay... so their may have not been really fluff, but it was for me! Update soon! Though I must say... I have to agree with Kurama about the whole brain thing... going to the Makai to read a dangerous stalkers diary is safe...
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Reviewed By: Hieis_girlfriend120 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah, an update!! every friday huh? i can deal with that. ^_^
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Title: Miss Tech Five
Reviewed By: Miss Tech Five [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 17:30 CST
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Good Story. Update Soon.
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 14:50 CST
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love it! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 23:25 CST
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very interesting chapter. this just keeps getting better. i loved every part of this chapter. the 1st part w/ Kurama & Hiei, then Kokuei(?) & Kira, & Kokuei & Kurama. all of those convos were great. then the thing w/ the Sage Yokai and Kira needing to go talk to the girl is all very interesting. this was a great chapter. keep up the good work & update soon
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 22:51 CST
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I know how that feels... I'm writing a story... @_@ or trying to... T_T It's confusing, and as soon as you think you have it figured out, something else sounds better... It makes me want to pull my hair out and generally go insane in public. But that's to exhausting... Wait... shouldn't I be working on it? ....nah. Heh, sorry 'bout that, internal conversations happen at the oddest times, great chapter, I think though, you enjoy killing off your OC's. THough I'm glad Rakura died! ^.^ I just want to tell you, I was day-dreaming(a minute or so ago) and I was like, what if one of Kira's old friends happen to be one of the Sage Youkai? And they were looking for her... I kinda get the impression she doesn't spend too much time with her family right now... or at school for that matter. Heh, I'll cut my rambling, now piece yourself together and type! ^.^
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 21:25 CST
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Wait... what happens if Kira forgets the names of the six youkai whose power is in the stone-thingy 'round her neck? During battle? O.O I'd do that... but that was just a random thought that crossed my mind...
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 21:23 CST
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*cheers* Yeah! Finally, someone admits that I'm amusing! Hah, take that all you people who can;t get my humor... though I meant that seriously, so I'm not really sure if that was an insult or not... heh. Ano means 'well' right? at least... that's what I mean whenver I mutter to myself. Imadoki's awesome! I want the second volume! T_T Thanks again for calling me amusing, that makes me feel so happy! A great chapter, though I sort of pity Kurama... I have the sudden urge to call him fox-chan... for having to carry Kira home. I just typed a whole paragraph practically... but I forgot to click this again... Ah well, it was just meaningless compliments anyways, stuff you can live without. I think. For all I know your an attention seeking freak, no offense meant(I'm one myself), though I kind've doubt that, you write far to well. Please update soon! I need to see what happens next...
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 18:42 CST
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good chapter. do they even realize that they're acting like boyfriend & girlfriend? i wonder... oh, you know that line in the beginning about Kira 'unplugging herself' from the CD player. yea, the way you said that was weird. she 'unplugged herself'! lol! okay, sorry. but the chapter was a good one. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_girlfriend120 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
coooooolio! she is alive....... and.... being...........er..... ALIVE!!!!!!!!! ...... UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Title: cool!!
Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE AND PEACE!!! HA!!! vash is so stupid and yet he\'s the most dangerous man around!!! anywho nice chappie!! love and peace....hmmm...ha..ha...i used to go crazy with that when i got into trouble or wished to cause havoc on the population!! geez, about romeo...you have to kiss a girl?!!!! and u r a girl...right? something is sickly wrong here!!! my new saying is \'god bless a-mer-i-ca!!\' or where ever the heck i am!!! read me fics please!!!
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