| "Rock My World" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 23:45 CST
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Kira's third good deed? On her way to Kurama's she accidentaly knocked over a trashcan that an old man tripped over just as two cars crashed nearby and debris went flying where the old man's head would have been, had he not tripped on the trashcan Kira had accidentily knocked over. Actually, I think it's something to do with Kurama, but I'm not really sure. So that was my guess! Your Romeo? Is your Drama teacher insane or are there a lack of guys or something? I pity you. You really have no choice 'bout that... aznd it will make your schedule this much more hectic! Which means this many less chapters! So anyways, you forgot to mention 'feh' 'meh' 'keh' Nn' and 'Nn Hm...' Just thought I'd mention that!
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Title: Ha
Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is extremely well typed!! i congradulate you in this fic!!! This truely is great. oh..like Yusuke does she need human energy? who will she get it from? Kurama *coughhint wink hintcough* i really can't wait!!!! BRILLIANT!!! please hurry and update and thanks for the review. will you fet some more reviews for me please? JA NE!!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 18:19 CST
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Well, I say she's taking out all her stress about the finals on you guys! I don't think you learn your score for a while, and these are important tests. So she has a good excuse to torture you guys! Anyways, the chapter... Hm, I feel sorry for the little girl that Kira possessed, and the little girl's mother. I'm wondering who this will play out...It promises to be interesting though!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 23:36 CST
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funny chapter. she possessed a little kid? now that's funny! can't wait for the next chapter to find out what 3 deeds she does.
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Title: wow ... good! *chappies 1-13*
Reviewed By: DG32173 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you can work on your spelling, but your grammer is pretty good. i enjoy the fic! well, keep up the good work and update soon! i enjoy it a lot and hope you continue! Ja ne and i'll keep an eye on you!
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Title: Pyro
Reviewed By: raha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 06:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Om my, she's dead? Thats deffinitly new. But in a good way, good luck in your studies. Update soon!
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Title: note
Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 21:51 CST
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I haven't been able to update this week so far due to finals, but I promise at least two new chapters this weekend...as long as I don't get sidetracked. ~Ja ne
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 22:01 CST
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Now, now, don't agravate the spirit fox too much... he may just somehow botch up your hopes for studying... which would be horrible. Hm, Kira's dead... that's a new twist... not many people kill off their OC's in such a lovely manner... I'm joking 'bout that, so don't take me seriously, on the lovely manner part... not the twist.I think this is actually rather interesting! So, Kira managed to make herself look like Amidamaru? Awesome... I feel sorry for the Ferry Girl escorting her though... ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 22:31 CST
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well, this is a development. Kira's dead? very unexpected. the pre-death scene was great, though; very descriptive. update asap so i can find out how they get her back, and when. for Kurama's sake, hopefully soon.
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Title: hinageshichankyoko
Reviewed By: hinageshichankyoko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! update Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Lily_the_Sugar_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 23:47 CST
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Oooo I really like it! =^_^= I'm glad I was bored and decided to read random fanfics^^' This one caught my eye and I decided to check it out. Oh...one thing I would like to point out. There's no plural in Japanese, so Youkais would just be youkai. ^^' Sorry...I just though I would point it out. Anyway, at first I really didn't like Kira, but she grew as a character. YOu did a really good job! I like that Kokuei guy too^^' Even though he's...evilish...yeah... O_0 he is evil right? Just wondering^^' It would be a little weird if he wasn't cuz he just seems like he would be...But he could just act a little...dark I guess^^' Oh well, keep up the great work! And I hope to find a new chapter soon^.~ Lotsa luv ~Lily~
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 01:23 CST
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Toshihiro... isn't that the author of the series? *goes and checks* er... but you you can see why I confused the names! Yoshiro Togashi... Yup. Their similiar, that's why. *nods* Anyways! What's Kurama up to now? He's up to something... or maybe he's just getting an ego boost... who knows? Please update soon! I want to see what happens when Kira's presence is 'requested'.
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Reviewed By: TheFluffster0 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 17:16 CST
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ooooh, this is really getting more and more interesting everytime. please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 09:49 CST
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It is fabulous. Update soon Pweeze. I had to keep calling and asking my friend what these words in Japanese means. I take Spanish, she's in Japanese. thanks for the subtitles at the end, now I don't have to wake her up to figure it out. I can't beleive you put Hiei in an elf costume, why didn't I think of that? my friend wants to know if it's ok to use your line 'scheming is evil, planning isn't' is it ok if she uses it?
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Reviewed By: Dark-Kaomi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 18:01 CST
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Okay this make me mad. I can't read chap 10. Help!
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