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| "Cats, Crutches and Babies? Oh My!" Reviews/Comments [ 134 ] | | Pages (9): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] | Title: Loved the Story
Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2010 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heheh I'm enjoying the story and I"m looking forward to more. Tohma really has some serious issues doesn't he? Wonder if he really loves Mika? Do you think he'll transfer his mother henning to all the children they do manage to have? You know, it's kind of interesting to Tats portrayed thus. He's young yet he does act really mature for his age a lot, yet I think a lot of people forget he's young. It must make Ryu feel more focused and good to be able to take care of him instead of having to have so many people looking after himself, ne? I'll bet the healed Ryu's personna would be a even mixture of the child like wonder mixed with the intelligent maturity. :) I wonder if Tats ever went through something traumatic if he'd be strong enough to help him through it? It's kind of hard to believe the Aizawa incident has not left some kind of marker on Shu. Yes, he is optimistic and prone to bouncing back, but what, not even a slight anxiety issue or nightmares? Wow. *lol* I read the whole scene with his Niece and thought 'awwwwww, how cute!' Bet both couples would make great parents! ^.^ Keep up the excellent work, I look forward to more :P
| Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2010 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heheh I'm enjoying the story and I"m looking forward to more. Tohma really has some serious issues doesn't he? Wonder if he really loves Mika? Do you think he'll transfer his mother henning to all the children they do manage to have? You know, it's kind of interesting to Tats portrayed thus. He's young yet he does act really mature for his age a lot, yet I think a lot of people forget he's young. It must make Ryu feel more focused and good to be able to take care of him instead of having to have so many people looking after himself, ne? I'll bet the healed Ryu's personna would be a even mixture of the child like wonder mixed with the intelligent maturity. :) I wonder if Tats ever went through something traumatic if he'd be strong enough to help him through it? It's kind of hard to believe the Aizawa incident has not left some kind of marker on Shu. Yes, he is optimistic and prone to bouncing back, but what, not even a slight anxiety issue or nightmares? Wow. *lol* I read the whole scene with his Niece and thought 'awwwwww, how cute!' Bet both couples would make great parents! ^.^ Keep up the excellent work, I look forward to more :P
| Reviewed By: eleniofme On: September 30, 2009 03:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tis story is amazing loved it and cnt wait for the next ch
| Reviewed By: DarkInuyashaangel101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 19:22 CST
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Haha, nice, I loved it! Even though Shuichi was a little OOC, it was still fantabulous! Can't wait for the next chapter, when Eiri and Shuichi hopefully finally get some, haha! Happy Valentines Day!
| Title: Don't Sleep or You'll Fail!!!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: December 17, 2008 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I know im a little late in the game coming in a 29 chapters, BUT for the record I read this story as fast as humanly possible in the span of 2 days. I think my title explains its' self -_-' The overall feel to this story is just beyond words. I think a bit of the emotional turmoil you were going through was portrayed in the characters; Yuki coming to terms with his feelings, standing up to his fater, and moving past the more negative things in his life. Ryuichi for growing up mentally and maturing as a wounded person. Neither of these characters have completly quite gotten over their own issues and they might never be able to, but you do show them growing and learning to cope with it. Not only that, but you portay Toma as "miserable", to quote Ryuichi, as he is unable to let go of the past. I think I see a bit of all these characters in you as well,(though I don't personally know you), it just seems to come through your writting which makes all the more meaningful to read b/c not only are your characters growing, but you as an author as well! -------Anywho, whether or not I do or don't know know what im talking about, (me being 'insightful' :p), I still enjoyed this story emencely! Though there is something I want to ask. Somewhere in the farther back chapters where Ryuichi was 1st being introduced your were going on about Hiroshi being alone for christmas having broken up with who'd-uma-whatit. I was wondering if this tid-bit had been forgotten or was going to be resolved later during the 'holiday' chapters? It might have been in an authors note so pardon me if I was rushing through and missed it ^^' By otherwise I had a blast reading this! Though maybe Shu-chan can reenact Yuki's naughtly leather dream as payback for Ryuichi's interruption? Lol, im teasing but, hey i'll take what I can get too *wink* [Insert Evil Laughter]---- Well now your responsable for the longest review I've ever written and i'll part with this: 1)This story deserves each and ever GOOD review, (of which im sure is all 130 soon-to-be 131 of them)it has gotten and will receive. 2)Merry Christmas, happy new year, or happy whatever religion you might be if any ^^' hehe 3)Aaaaand finally, Until the next chapter!!! ;p See ya then~
| Reviewed By: DarkInuyashaangel101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!! I'm so glad you're continuing with this! I freaking LOVED the scene with Eiri and Shuichi. I love their playful banter and sexual chemistry. I hope you'll continue with it in the next chapter. Can't wait!
| Reviewed By: creotia_flayier [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me just say, bravo!! This story is better than I have read. I don't know what I could say that has not been said before. The humor is what keeps me tied into your story. Usually when people write stories, they tend to want to do something to Shuichi. I was surprised when Eiri ended up on crutches!! That was a real twist. I also love how the "Baby" turned out to nonchalantly remind him of Shuichi.
| Reviewed By: Belle ange [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hug* I know you said not to worry but I can't help it! I have dealt with so many similar situation in the last few years and seen the results that it makes me tear up thinking about anyone having to go through it personally. I'm just glad that you're doing better and have such a positive outlook on things. Not sure if you're one for religion but mind if I send up a little prayer for you anyway? Oh and no thanks necessary. It just really ticks me off when people act that way. There is a difference between a flame and a critique and anyone who can't figure it out really has no business giving their opinion. Well, I'm going to stop talking your ear off (metaphorically speaking, of course) about all this depressing stuff and get to the story. I can hardly wait for the next chapter because I know Eiri's reaction to Ryu staying is gonna be priceless! And poor Ryu. Tatsuya must be as miserable as he is. I wonder what kind of words he and his father will be having. Hmm... Okay, I'm ranting which is proof that I need to get some sleep. See you next update!
| Reviewed By: Belle ange [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 05:11 CDT
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Eiri, as always, is amazingly portraid(sp?) and thanks to that lovely little note at the end, we all know why. You really do paint him in such an original and ideal light. I hate when he's made out to be this constant jerk because I know that even despite the more graphic tragedies in his life, the goodness hidden deep down has to show up sometime. If he really was the jerk everyone said he was, Shuichi would have been long gone, persistance or not. He's just got his own way of showing love like going behind Shuichi's back and beating the crap out of whoever gives him trouble or secretly having an expensive gift made for him. Thank you for giving him a personality where so many others fail to do so and definetly no hard feelings. I'm just glad you update when you can. Oh and by the way... *shifty eyes* Hiro is awesome!
| Reviewed By: DarkInuyashaangel101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I'm so glad you updated! It's been forever, but it's totally worth it. I'm sorry about what happened over the summer. I hope you end up being better off and happy. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter and thank you!
| Title: To Anon221
Reviewed By: Belle ange [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 11:04 CDT
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You rude, cavalier, rapacious jacka**! If your going to make a negative critique, at least stick to the basic rules of civility! Give a valid reason why you dislike the story and refrain from insulting the story forthrite as well as the authors intelligence. Lack of reverance to this concept just goes to prove how unintelligent you are.
| Reviewed By: Belle ange [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing as always! This chapter was cute and funny and I enjoyed very much. As for your end note on the Christmas holiday, I think your portrayal(sp?) is basically right on. Although do you mind if I make a tiny suggestion? As you know and stated, Christmas is a time to spend with loved ones and to exchange gifts but above all else, Christmas eve is a day for lovers. I would love to see a little of your patent awkward zaniness play out with this night of l'amour. lol! Just a thought! Update soon please!!!!
| Reviewed By: Anon221 On: March 21, 2008 14:11 CDT
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What IS it with this crappy fic? With 2268 hits on the first chapter, but only 59 on the last one, it's plain you've lost most of your readers. Don't you know when you're writing something bad?
| Reviewed By: doyel20 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW!! The story is awesome. By the way what happened to the Porsche Shu-chan was about to give? Did he already gave it? Or maybe i missed it... Please continue.
| Reviewed By: Belle ange [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel awful that it's taken me this long to review again but busy, busy, busy! The last two chapters were as amazing as always though I especially like the addition of Baby. She reminds me of a kitten I used to have. Enough reminiscing. Anyway, I just wanted to mention that your vocabulary is as elequent as any other writer here if not more so and that I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. And due to your response to another reviewer, I'm more than ready for this epic ending but the wait is certainly worth it.
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