| "500yrs to wait" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] |
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Reviewed By: demonchik39 On: February 24, 2005 22:37 EST
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This is awsome! You have to update soon!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: February 24, 2005 21:25 EST
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Oi, Kagome...::slaps hand to face and shakes head:: leave it to the girl to forget that there is a five hundred year difference. i still think its great that Jaken is in her living room. ...why can i see her breaking out a broom when first seeing him? bad enough she's called 'fore!' to the toad with his own staff...LOL. i love jaken, he's great. (not really but anyway). great update! i can't wait to see Kag's reaction to InuYasha now. just let him slip into third person....LMAO. keep it going!!
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Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 15:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: YASMIN78 On: February 24, 2005 10:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaawwwwwwww i love it so far .im very intrigued ..please continnue!!!! i cant wait to see her reaction when she see inuyasha ! how sweet!!!
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Reviewed By: lunatrick114 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 01:31 EST
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Great start! I love it so far... keep writing!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: February 24, 2005 00:20 EST
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dear god, InuYasha is now talking in third person. it was bad when fluffles did it...ACK!! i honestly yelled (not the rigth word but the only one i can think of) when i saw that. it was weird...like some honest creepy dream. GREAT update. poor Kags has Jaken to deal with. i think it would have been better if InuYasha showed up at her doorstep looking all swauve but hey, tis my daydream i guess. ::sigh:: GREAT update and i can't wait to see what else you do in the story. i love it.
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Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 20:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE THIS FIC!! I cant stop lauphing. Please write more.
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Title: hehehehe
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 15:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao Toutousai is so lost to the world and thanks for the E-mail keep up the good work and update again soon like you said you would! ^_^
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: February 23, 2005 07:16 EST
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you did a great job writing this! it gave me smile this morning when i got up and read it. thanks.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 03:16 EST
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Sweet! This is such a cute and fun story, I get a total kick out of reading it! Please keep up with your tale, I'll be waiting!!
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Title: Tanoshi na
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had lots of fun reading the first for chapters. I love that you've captured Totosai's character so well. He is so funny. I kinda want to touch bases with Kagome, how has she reacted to being pulled from Sengoku Judai...well anyway I'll put you on my favorites list because I read to many stories all at once and I need the reminders to let me know when a new chapter is come...I hope I see an update soon. Ja matta ne
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Title: hehehe
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 19:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that's funny and i love the who's on first bit! that one always confuzes me but i just love to use it on other people! well keep up the good work and update again soon!!! ^___^
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Title: yay!!!!
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugii On: February 22, 2005 14:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayyyyyyyyyy great first story ::dances:: now keep writing and update soon ^_^ hugs from amyfushigiyugi
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 02:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i like how you have incorperated the ending of the story that we all know and twisted it to Kagome getting sucked through the well. its great that after waiting 500 years to see Kagome, InuYasha is oblivious to the date...you would expect him to be there. but that makes this great! you have a good flow of strong dialogue between your charactes which is excellent. i would throw in a little more detail and maybe some internal thoughts for our loveable charactesrs. baka-yasha!!! great story and keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 11:45 EST
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Good story, do update. The well is called, "Bone Eaters," but whatever. :-D
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