| "500yrs to wait" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] |
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 04:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. You most defently did as you set out to do as i enjoed reading your story very much. Only one thing could have made it better in my mind and that was a 150yr latter or so section as well. But i am in no way mad/angry/etc that it's not there i just like the whole consept of immorlity and the mort time you can make pass the more i'l like it. I hope to see more stories from you.
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Title: *Sniffle*
Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: August 10, 2005 03:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sooooo gonna miss this story. It was so awesome that I've copied it so I could read it over and over and over and over again. That was so cute having the flea tell them the story of their (Inu and Kag) adventure, what cracks me up is he was always running away......LOL! Well GF I hope to see more of your writings again soon so keep me up to date and I'll see ya at the next review...cherylv@seward.net
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Title: AMAZING!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a perfict ending to a fantastic story.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: August 10, 2005 00:16 EDT
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very good story. i am so glad to see how it ended up. i was beginning to wonder if our hero's were going to end up at war but all turned out well. i'm really happy wiht how fluffles dealt with the demons, very well done. man, teh kids were little mirror images, weren't they? hehe. tell me inu is going to have to fend off kouga's cub away from his daughter? LOL. the part of inu smacking kouga's ass had me rolling for a good ten minutes. very well done!! i love this story, it is very well written and is most definetly one of my favorites. keep up teh great work!!!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: August 09, 2005 21:44 EDT
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great job! i enjoyed your fanfic. keep up the good work and i look forward to any other fics you happen to write.
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Title: 500yrs to wait
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 23:37 EDT
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I think that went rather well^^ Nice chapter, keep it up =P
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Reviewed By: missbritt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 02:27 EDT
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hey its another good chapter good job ;) keep it up ok
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Title: Review Chapter Twenty-nine
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter. I really liked the Wovoka/Kagome interaction, and I'd like to see more of it, as well as more of Kagome's interactions with everyone that Inuyasha knows, but she does not. I'm really looking forward to that. ... I think the lemon part could have been better,but it fit in with the story well enough, and was pretty decent, if lacking in juicy detail. ... I hope they don't fall asleep out there. ... When will he be showing her the dojo? Will she get a chance to practice and/or demonstrate her kyudo (japanese archery) skills? ... I really would like more interaction between Kagome and those that have only heard of her second hand. ... ... ... ... Can't wait for the next chapter, Kin.
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Title: GREAT!!!
Reviewed By: alize On: August 03, 2005 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome update!!! i love your story i cant wait for the next chapter. please dont leave us loyal fans waiting to long.
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: August 01, 2005 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! *sniffles*
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Zach On: July 30, 2005 07:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they seemed a little out of character even from the beginning, but when 500 yrs passes then they gotta be different lol, u could say u have an excuse, neway it was very good tho it just took me 8 hrs to read all of it (i think) and now its 7:30 am and im really tired, gotta sleep, hope u write more fanfics!
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Title: SWEET!!!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: July 30, 2005 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was totally AWESOME!!!! Well done GF!! Using Kouga as a pinata, now that was FUNNY!!! Can't wait for him to be able to move again and see what he might think he'll do!!! And the mating that was sooooooo sweet.....almost made me cry...LOL! Okay now, when's the wedding and is the honeymoon going to be in the Cribbean? you know a party is in order with Mankee and the bird youkai? LOL!! love them Bird Youkai LMAO!!! Well I'll hear from ya later and I'm glad to see the update, I was starting to worry you weren't around anymore (*sighs looking around room everyday*) hehehe....you take care and well see ya around!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: July 30, 2005 03:14 EDT
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I hope that not the end of the story?? I glad that Inuyasha has finally found happiness. Now their lives together can finally being. Update soon.
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Title: Nice...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I want a more graphic lemon! lol Oh well... Very nice, but i swear this seemed like an ending...is it over? :sniffle:
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Reviewed By: Morbid angel On: July 30, 2005 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg what are you going to do next? I can't wait to read what ever you have instore for this couple. How will the matting ritual change Kagome? Will Inuyasha finaly be as happy as we all want him to be? Omg I want to know what happens, update ASAP.
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