| "500yrs to wait" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] |
| Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 ] |
Title: hehehehe
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 15:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao Toutousai is so lost to the world and thanks for the E-mail keep up the good work and update again soon like you said you would! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: morwen re On: February 23, 2005 07:16 EST
Comment/Review:
you did a great job writing this! it gave me smile this morning when i got up and read it. thanks.
|
Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 03:16 EST
Comment/Review:
Sweet! This is such a cute and fun story, I get a total kick out of reading it! Please keep up with your tale, I'll be waiting!!
|
Title: Tanoshi na
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had lots of fun reading the first for chapters. I love that you've captured Totosai's character so well. He is so funny. I kinda want to touch bases with Kagome, how has she reacted to being pulled from Sengoku Judai...well anyway I'll put you on my favorites list because I read to many stories all at once and I need the reminders to let me know when a new chapter is come...I hope I see an update soon. Ja matta ne
|
Title: hehehe
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 19:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that's funny and i love the who's on first bit! that one always confuzes me but i just love to use it on other people! well keep up the good work and update again soon!!! ^___^
|
Title: yay!!!!
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugii On: February 22, 2005 14:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayyyyyyyyyy great first story ::dances:: now keep writing and update soon ^_^ hugs from amyfushigiyugi
|
Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 02:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i like how you have incorperated the ending of the story that we all know and twisted it to Kagome getting sucked through the well. its great that after waiting 500 years to see Kagome, InuYasha is oblivious to the date...you would expect him to be there. but that makes this great! you have a good flow of strong dialogue between your charactes which is excellent. i would throw in a little more detail and maybe some internal thoughts for our loveable charactesrs. baka-yasha!!! great story and keep it up!
|
Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 11:45 EST
Comment/Review:
Good story, do update. The well is called, "Bone Eaters," but whatever. :-D
|
| Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 ] |
