| "500yrs to wait" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 11:48 EST
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Mankee...that was a rotten trick...but very affective. Getting InuYasha away from the crowd was a good idea. Having him 'lose it' while surrounded by people wouldn't have helped the situation. Now he can say what he wants to say to Kagome without worrying someone else will hear...that is, just as soon as he comes around! LOL
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: March 13, 2005 22:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. give it up to inuyasha to pass out after seeing Kagome. no..no he hasn't changed at all, has he? LMAO. that was great!!!! i'm happy to see you updated the story, and what a wonderful update it was. funny thing, don't know if you know the song, but i was listening, while reading teh first part of the chapter, to Down with teh sickness, by disturbed adn it so fit. it really is, for the most part, InuYasha's song. hmm...now what i really really want to know is what did he do to her family? i have a sick sense it has something to do with her father but i shall reframe from commenting as of right now. great idea and story line...as always...keep it up and get some sleep!!! :-)
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Title: Awesomeness
Reviewed By: skaterpg guy (not logged in....I think) On: March 13, 2005 22:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! This is really really good. I cant wait for the next chapter.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 21:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! about time!!! ^_^ i'm i'm sorry to hear about you dad mine passed away 3/29/2004 of last year i hope you dont lose yours wouldn't want you in depresson now would we? well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: demonchik39 On: March 13, 2005 20:34 EST
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yeah!! InuYasha and Kagome!!! YEAH!!! I hope you get the surgery, you want the surgery, right? Well I hope you get what you want and that your father gets better. Demon
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 18:40 EST
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i hope your dad gets better. also, this was a great chapter and you most update soon. i must know what will happen between them! this story is great, do continue!!!
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Title: cherylv@seward.net
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 13, 2005 18:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's not enough 10's in the world for this chapter! It was just outstanding!! I just love a story that can make you cry for joy and now I must wait for the next chapter and I hope it's soon...Don't think my heart could take it LOL! Yep! I love those Caribean Bird Youkias' They definatly be my favorite charaters in this story! Well I guess I'll be waiting with baited breath again for the next chapter so keep up the great success and prayers for the health of your father.
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Reviewed By: Fireminx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 08:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story! Good luck to your father:) I hope his surgery goes well.
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Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 00:32 EST
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sorry i havnt been reviewing. But i cant wait till Inuyasha and Kagome meet. I may be horrible of me but i want to see Inuyasha and Kagome get in a fight , him call her a name and lose his temper, and then him get sat. And then after that they make up. hahahah yah. So i hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 08, 2005 20:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it loved it loved it!! ^_^ keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: cherylv@seward.net
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 08, 2005 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an awesome chapter and now she's making them take her to see InuYasha, that is soooo cool. My prayers are with you and your family and I hope all goes well with your father...Will be waiting with baited breath for your next update....And thank you for sharing your story it's AWESOME!!!!
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Title: *smile* Better and better. . .
Reviewed By: weyrdkat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 02:34 EST
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hey littleolmee, It really seems like you're adding a bit more detail into your chapters. That makes it easier to get into and understand, although I must admit, it's still a bit bare for my taste. I like to be lost in their worlds. It's good though. The story line is definitely picking up in capture ability. I hope your dad pulls through okay, and I'm not rating this time cause I can't remember what I put last time and I don't want to put less. Take care! Ashli
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: March 08, 2005 00:14 EST
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Wow, InuYasha sure has come a long way from his hot-tempered, short-fused, rowdy hanyou...except for his mouth! -LoL- I eagerly await the next chapter. Best wishes for your father.
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Reviewed By: demonchik39 On: March 07, 2005 23:58 EST
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I hope your father's surgery goes well and update when you can...
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: March 07, 2005 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...that's pretty intense. i would have loved to see an drugged out InuYasha running around, Shippo is so right. wow...booze and MJ huh? hehe, and who said that people back then didn't know about that stuff. poor yasha, was doing it without realizing it. really intersting twist over how he was able to control his youkai. i'm intrested how he was just able to do it, like an on and off switch. that's kind of creepy, a stoic inuyasha. ::shivers:: eep. anyway, great update and i wish you luck with your father and the surgery. all prayers are with you!
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