| "500yrs to wait" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] |
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Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 On: March 02, 2005 22:13 EST
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AHHHHHHHHHH!!! i LOVE your story. Please, please, please, PLEASE update soon! this is like the best story that i've readen in such a long time!! :)I give you a 10 out of a bazilion!:)ok i'll shut up now and let you continue with your life(and hopefully your story)lol:) -Ja Ne-
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Title: ellow
Reviewed By: Arienishi111 On: March 02, 2005 11:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love that your udating fast. WHY CANT THEY SEE EACHOTHER!!!! COME ON!!! HE WAITS 500 YEARS AND THEN CANT SEE HER!!!??? I think you need to make Kagome get fed up with waiting and walk in all mad and her hands on her hips and have her screaming at Inuyasha why he hasnt come to see her all why making him sit. stillsullivan@yahoo.com
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Title: please update!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 01:14 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it hope you update soon i'm dieing to know what happens next. really i love your story.
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Title: Awww...Poor Puppy...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: March 01, 2005 21:25 EST
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Tsk, tsk...InuYasha has the proverbial cold feet. The last minute heebee jeebee's. He needs to get a grip on himself...Dutch Courage is fleeting and temporary at best. I hope he doesn't think he has to get completely pickled just to see her. I know he's worried she won't like the changes in him; 500 years will leave their mark on anyone. But she's still the same. For her, it's only been a few days. "C'mon Yash-kun, give the girl a chance. Sure, she might yell at you, maybe even 'sit' you for getting soused and making her wait needlessly...but no matter what, you know that she will think about it and welcome you with open arms in the end. If she can forgive you always running off to see Kikyou, she can forgive your natural insecurities making you do dumb things...as usual!" LOL -- Great 2 chapters.
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Reviewed By: demonchik39 On: March 01, 2005 21:18 EST
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He still hasn't seen her yet! God how long?! Well update soon!!!!
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Title: huh.. what goes here?... oh yea a title! well herer i go......'A REVIEW!' by: Samantha lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (yea yea yea i'm like never signed in) On: March 01, 2005 21:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehehehe thankx for E-mailing me back i didn't think you'd do it in like a day but i guess i was wrong but i thank you again for updateing and that was really funny hitting Jaken is very funnny! ^_^ keep up the good work and update again soon please? and i think your right to E-mail people if they review you i just wish the people who revied me were at least signed in!
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Reviewed By: missbritt321 On: March 01, 2005 21:01 EST
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again it was really good keep it up ok i cant wait to read what happenes next well thanks;)
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (sry nsi) On: March 01, 2005 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope InuYashas not drunk when Kagome shows up! ^_^ lmao well keep upthe good work and update again soon please? i really really really wanna find out what's gonna happen when they meet!!!!!!
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Arienishi11 On: March 01, 2005 04:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was funny, i just skipped the part when...you know....YUCK!!! I cant wait till Inuyasha and Kagome finaly meat again. So please update soon. And sorry i havnt been logging in when i write the reviews. stillsullivan@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: February 28, 2005 21:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well...you definatly have some...intresting...characters in this bunch, now don't you? i see this going BAD places. a guy who apparently has a thing for InuYasha...getting him wasted...alone...with Kagome on the way. ::shivers:: i see misunderstandings up the wazoo on the horizion. if i'm wrong, then thank the kami's, if not, i'll hold on for the ride. LOL. i got to say, i laughed for a good while off the 'things that make you go yuck' comment. that was GREAT. i mean, really really awesome!!! Great job and keep it up!!!!
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Title: A decent premise. . .
Reviewed By: weyrdkat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 21:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story's premise is an original one in the way it looks at Inuyasha's wait, but the bad grammar and frequent misspellings detract from the language. There is also a lack of detail that keeps the reader from becoming attached to the work. There are also a couple of plot holes where you try to deviate from the series, and that would be fine if they were more believeable. But, I do like the narrative. Perhaps a beta reader could help with misspellings and more organized details and character thought and speech.
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Reviewed By: demonchik39 On: February 28, 2005 21:09 EST
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Man, he still hasn't gotten Kaogme! What's taking soo long!? Oh and thanks for the warning, I defiantly didn't wan to read that yoai lemon... Demon
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Reviewed By: arienishi11 On: February 28, 2005 19:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I havnt read the chapter yet cuz i was wondering about when you said homosexual and i dont like that and was wondering if you'd tell me what you mean. stillsullivan@yahoo.com
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Title: Hoooo-whee!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: February 28, 2005 19:04 EST
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Is Mankee off the hook or what?! I'm with Yash-kun...ain't nobody old enough to see that!! LOL To quote an old favorite song; "...I get my kicks above the waistline, Sunshine!" *guffaw* Are you sure you want to get Inuyasha drunk?? LOL
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Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 11:50 EST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! I cant believe!!you ended it there!!! YOu have to write more sooon pleaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeee!!!!! i BEGGING YOU! Thanks for the chapter.
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