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Reviewed By: chibimech On: February 27, 2005 19:41 CST
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previous chapter: "...but Sesshomaru realized that she did not need a lesson in courtly behavior, but that he needed a lesson in love." current chapter: kagome:"I hate you." Sessoumaru nearly giggled. what??????
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Reviewed By: chibimech On: February 27, 2005 19:33 CST
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The story is pretty good, my only prob is that you made sess...schizophrenic. Ex. he said he thought he loved her, then he's carving letters in her back
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, what a fun way to alleviate boredom and help with training...start a war. With Kagome in heat, that could be entertaining. Don't worry about rambling, you haven't done it yet.
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Title: aww....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
traning is always funner that way so keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 09:36 CST
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wow.. this is really good and I can't wait to see what happens, hehe... pretty great so far.. update soon, k? good luck
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: SMO [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I started reading this story at 6 this morning and now its 10 (did have to take a few breaks though to keep from crying (i'm a big baby)). I love how you had made Inu Yasha the way you did, never expected it. I hope you update soon. I cant wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah just stop there v_v!! THERE BETTER BE A LEMON IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!! If not that's ok^_^!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 19:32 CST
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You know its hard to determine if a wish is selfish or not sometimes. And I think that Kagome is really trying to find a good one. And of course she was looking out for everyone about Sesshoumaru. Who wants that demon mad? Not me. Liked this alot. Hope for more soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Norkio On: February 14, 2005 23:23 CST
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Oi, I love this story! ^^ I've been reading it all night.. Keep up the good work :D
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww, thank you!! Hey, if I think a story is good enough then I'll stick by it until the end, and every other story written afterward. So you're gonna be stuck with me for a long time!! Don't worry about keeping us waiting too long; you haven't done that yet. In fact, you're one of the few authors that constantly updates. That's a good thing because it means that you're very creative and have a good sense of where this story is going to go. I hope it lasts too. Now to actually talk about the chapter, hehe. I thought we were going to lose Kagome again when the reality of losing her friends hit her. I'm glad Sesshomaru is there for her now, and is loving towards her. I thought he was a sadistic bastard earlier in the story, but I'm very happy to see he's changed, but still has that edge to him. It also seems that Kagome still somewhat fears him. Case in point, when he went all red-eyed during Round One. The other times he's done that was when he was hurting her. That's going to be something Sesshomaru has to help Kagome get over. Shame about her friends, but I can see that this will allow Kagome to concentrate solely on Sess.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 08:30 CST
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Poor Kagome!! But I wish I could trade places with her^_~!!
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl(not signed in) On: February 14, 2005 08:22 CST
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awesome... I can't believe that happened though.. wowie.. this is awesome.. good luck and have fun hehe...
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You may have went off on a tangent, but said tangent worked. I really enjoyed this chapter. Sesshomaru, it seems, is finally going to show Kagome all the love he has for her. I'm glad he's passed the whole cruelty stage. I can't wait until you post the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Black_widow(notsignedin) On: February 11, 2005 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been a very good fic. I love the lemons. First time? if so awsome. was ch. thirteent he last chapter? if so, can you write another fic? 'CAUSE YOU ARE HELLA AWSOME!! anyways...*ahem* you are a very good writter aside from the fact that it was like, sess all violent.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 09:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO SESSHOUMARU!!!! How could you do that!!!!!!!!!! Bad author, bad!!^_^ love it please update soon!
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