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Reviewed By: Belle Ange (not signed in) On: June 29, 2008 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was amazing! I'm sorry I haven't been keeping up with the story for a while but I finally finished it. I have so much to say about it but there is not enough space and I don't have enough time so I will be content to say that this story truly was beautiful in innumerable ways. The final chapter, though... you actually made me cry. Thank you for this story. My only critique is finding a beta to edit for grammar, spelling and structure but the story was amazing. And as for being a beta, drop me a line and I'd be happy to help. Your new greatest fan, Belle Ange. snowleopardbelleange@yahoo.com
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Title: ur amazing
Reviewed By: Kiki33 On: May 19, 2008 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! ths was a great story!! I loved how u even gave kikyo and naraku their own sorta happy ending !:) Soo good!! cant wait 4 ur next story! Ur an amazing author!
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Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 19:12 CDT
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Best ending ever. You got some talent!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 12:47 CDT
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Well done! I'm so glad you kept at this and finished it - such a lovely story, and so well done! *goes off to re-read it and rec it everywhere* its always a joy to be able to start reading a story at the first chapter and follow it to the end together with the author. I'm going to miss this fic, its brand of humour and your particular style of giving them such lively and vibrant characters! I can't say I'll mind if something tickles you again in the future! Well done on this, and honest and happy well done.
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Title: WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
Reviewed By: adeaneri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
what the HEEELLL that was so not fair. to end it thus that was very cruell im so mad at you please update soon.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Anime_Angel_05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you don't update soon, i may very well commit suicide... i can't believe that you left it there!! I stayed up all night and read this story all the way up to when i was supposed to go to work and tried my hardest to leave early so i could finish it, and you do this to me? *sob* How will i live if this is not updated soon? How can i possibly go on? please, if you have any mercy... update... please... *sad violin muic pplaying in the background*
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Reviewed By: Sayo124 (nsi) On: April 11, 2008 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. It's been forever since I've had time to review. Anyhoo. o_O Geez. Drama-llama. It makes me wonder if being royal is really worth it. Seriously. I may love my country, but I'm not IN love with it. Ya understand? I don't mind ducking under desks at some times... And dear sweet Kagome, this is a desk-hiding time. -nod nod- Right. I've said my piece. Ja.
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Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 18:59 CDT
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Ahhh now I understood why you "killed" Kagome, I had forgoteen this was based on snow white...anyways lovely chapter. Oh and since I am the queen of the universe, try to go a little easy on Inuyasha...please?
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Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 19:54 CDT
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Wow...very dramatic. Hopefully KAgomes love will see him through
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 21:01 CDT
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OMG!!!! You are so evil!!! Atleast you saved Rin!!! Atleast you saved RIN!!???? OMG!!! How could you!!?? You so have to update and like soon!!! That so deserved a beating!!! If this had been an anime you would be getting chased by a bunch of angery small people...Well please please update soon!! I so have to know what is happening. I knew it was to good to be true that Kikyou was killed that easy. So I'm guessing that when the real InuYasha killed thefake Kikyou the dust that exploded on him was the reason that he is doing her evil bidding right know. and the apple was a poisionous apple from snow white, and that the dwarfs are going to come rushing in the room when she falls yell at InuYasha, be shocked when they realize its Kikyou, or is Kikyou dust going to were off and InuYasha is left there to wallow in greif and misery and get man handled my the dwarfs, and then Kaede is going to say I dont know what to do. And InuYasha is never going to leave her side and while she is still in sleep mood he is going to have an urge to kiss her, and he will kiss he and she will awaken. Take vingence on Kikyou and live happily ever after!!!!?????Well update so I can know if I;m right! Bye!-HCDK
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 20:58 CDT
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i agree with Midoriko-sama with the fact of mdoriko being with miroku, but in the last seen i have three pradictions (sp?) its either inuyasha being mind controlled (Naraku, or something was in the ashes). Naraku,the abused village girl or someone from the opposite army is controlling inuyasha like with the village girl and kikyou. or the apple had some sick messed up wierd medicion (sp?). [sorry i can't spell today ^-^'' hehe] Can't wait to find out if im right! oh and i love the fact that kikyou was green....ewwww naraku was 'doing' a green thing.
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Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 19:57 CDT
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What the hell..? Interesting very interesting...
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 09:05 CDT
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*laughs heartily* Oh my, with the way you wrote the slayers, they all looked like mini James Bonds! And now that they're back in full swing? Geez! Kikyou're going to see red! Pardon... green. *snorts*...... And oi, was that Midoriko with Kouga on the mountain-ish?
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Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 22:44 CDT
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Wow greally great chapter very sad though. I think I wanna see sango and miroku next.
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 06:58 CDT
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*snicker* green skin, eh? That's a bloody nice touch, if I've ever seen one! Bravo! Enjoyed this chapter; especially Inuyasha's botched up attempts at trying to solve his mess.
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