| "Snow White and the Seven 'Dwarfs'...Sort of" Reviews/Comments [ 135 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW AWESOME! The end with Rin's mom was very unexpected.
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 13:43 CDT
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Can't anyone ever kill Kikiyo without bringing her back? Well, at least you are kind of following the orignal story with the clay body and all. Great story, update soon!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 09:20 CDT
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww its so cute, I love it...so I couldnt actually get chapet 43 to work but 44 was great...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Title: Awesome....but
Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 14:47 CDT
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ok i duunoo if its just me but it seems like the word at the beggining of each sentence is missing..
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Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 22:06 CDT
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Totally awesome chapter!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 21:28 CDT
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loves it...the only thing is when Kags and Inu were arguing over worry lines u put 'to do' 'to not' and i think u meant to put 'do too' do not', but dont hate me if im wrong and u meant to do that, its not my fault that ive lived under a rock for my entire life...anyways like i said i loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Mischievous-Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 23:37 CDT
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oo i cant wait to see the plan folding out.....luv the chap (as per usual) cant wait til ur nxt update....
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for ur next update
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Reviewed By: ~Inuluvher151~ On: May 21, 2007 04:13 CDT
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hey this is a really great story can't wait to find out what happens to Jak and if Inu will ever get to confess he love to the ditzy of a gal Kagome (i'm not talking smack i like her) but i hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 08:29 CDT
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LMFAO! wow that's great...loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet update soon
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Reviewed By: mischievous-angel [nsi] On: May 16, 2007 03:06 CDT
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waaaa sumtime i wonder if bad timing is really THAT IRRITATING!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol well it is i guess..... but anyways....Jak is so cool...lol i sound weird but he is! he's personality is hilarious. awesum chapter as always...but i really feel sorry for inu tho... P.S. if i really did make u cry i am VERY SORRY frm the bottom of my heart.
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Reviewed By: Mischievous-Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 06:08 CDT
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Ahhhhhhhhhh sorry i didnt review the last chapter. i was on holiday n i got back n found there was 2 updates.hehe. i wanna play with sesshy's hair....*pout* i mean who wouldnt like his long silvery hair. LOL. grest chapter...heh kag n inu got interupted again. oh i dont really mind if u hav long chapters or short ones as long as u update i cool with any.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 19:03 CDT
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lol poor rin, lol...anyways i love it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Mischievous-Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 22:17 CST
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HEY again....sorry got no suggestions...i've been out in the sun all day coz of skool's sport day. I'm so tired....love this chapter...yea it was a comic relief from the tension i guess...hehe
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