| "Snow White and the Seven 'Dwarfs'...Sort of" Reviews/Comments [ 135 ] |
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Title: Please Stop Making Kikyou So Mean
Reviewed By: Mika_san [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please stop making Kikyou a *lut, *ho*e, and an airhead because although I know you don't like Kikyou, but it was actually all Naraku's fault, and if Kikyou wasn't in the series, we wouldn't even HAVE Inuyasha. So please go easier on her. It really does make me angry to see people making fun of her.
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Reviewed By: Mischievous-Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 10:19 CDT
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that was so sweet..........i really hope u update soon. all the suspense is killing me....but i dont want to die yet considering the fact i wouldnt be able to read this fic when u update. but yea i cant write a long review now coz it's 4:19 am....*yawn* and i am really tired.....awesome story so far!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: September 06, 2006 18:07 CDT
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Entertaining story. I feel really sorry for Inuyasha stuck in the castle with the old *itch and her jealous "lover". Mayu hasn't been mentioned for a while. Please save the cook who is apparently from the future. :P Kikyo deserves the fate of the evil witch from snow white - too loose all her powers as she ages rapidly (and painfully) into her demise of dust.
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Reviewed By: cehavard90 On: September 04, 2006 20:13 CDT
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luv the newest chapters so far please update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 19:34 CDT
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lol tee hee whose there???...awww dont worry i was just in a bad mood the last time...like ive said before love it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 14:16 CDT
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loved it...u can "mostly read" my reviews??? i dont no if i should be inulted or not...so im going to choose not to be...but anyways i loved it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry up and post
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loves the new chap...poor poor poor rin and aym..sry short form but im 2 lazy 2 write it out in full...anyways like i said i loves it and u HAVE to update soon...Cheers
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Reviewed By: cehavard90 On: August 02, 2006 10:46 CDT
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man this is a really great fanfic please update soon!!
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Title: ummmmmm
Reviewed By: CanaryDiamond [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to proofread a little more carefully and put spaces between dialog. The story line is good except that the characters are a little unrealistic. I gather you hate Kikyo, allot, but don't take that out on your story line. (she is a bitch, a slut yada yada....) Sesshomaru is WAY OOC. That's ok and all, but strange to read. Also try and not follow the stereotypes that are associated to the characters in Inuyasha. I know you want to keep them acting like themselfs but take into account their pasts on the show, filled with heartbreak. I don't gather that in this story. What is Inuyasha's past that makes him so pissy. The death of his mom should not be enough of a reason. He is a prince after all he should kinda know how to act like one, controlled insolence I guess is what I am getting at. But this is your story you can make them act however you want. These are my sole opinions and maybe help...or not. Anyway, you have a great story in the making.
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Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 14:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
review review review pleaz review
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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(notsignedin) On: June 22, 2006 15:29 CDT
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bout time you updated its been like half a year scinc4e the last time..Any way you better update soon ja ne.
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Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update pleaze because omg that was wonderful
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 12:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOAH!!!!! GOOD STORY! I am really enjoying it and can't wait for you to update it. Please update really, REALLY soon.
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Title: hey long time no see?
Reviewed By: Kooris_Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey it's my InuYashasLoveLorn wow.... i haven't seen this fic in a while..... and it's still as good as ever! good job keep up the good work i can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next now that he's found her....... can you believe the way mediaminer was for a while? i had to get a new name b/c of something i did i think...... uggg... anywho keep up the good work i can't wait to read more! ^^
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