| "Torn" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 16:41 EST
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Poor Bulma. she must be going through hell. And I think we all can guess who's coming in the next chapter. I enjoy reading your story; I secretly hope for a happy end though. keep up the good work. By the way, thank you for your email, I liked that.
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Reviewed By: aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 13:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very good, Vegeta is so dark here. Can't wait the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Frabs! On: February 16, 2005 01:01 EST
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REPLY!!!! PLEASE!!! I'm the one writing the Fever ficcy! I'll update if you will!!! PLEASE! What's wrong with Veggie! ~Frabs!
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Title: torn
Reviewed By: nu On: February 15, 2005 15:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..., wow...WOW... WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!! Really good, and really dark, just the way i like them. Keep writing.I mean it.
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Title: torn
Reviewed By: nu On: February 15, 2005 15:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..., wow...WOW... WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!! Really good, and really dark, just the way i like them. Keep writing.I mean it.
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 16:00 EST
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I'm still reading. I must say I am fasinated by your story. I think you portrait his dark side all to well. Please hurry with the updates
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Reviewed By: beckwardo On: February 13, 2005 16:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very well written It is very it is very depressive and dark-I loved it! ;D pleeeeasseee write more :D
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: Chimiko On: February 13, 2005 16:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sob Sob -.- That is fucking good story! OOOOHHHHHHHH MMMMYYY GGGGGOOOOOOOOODDDDD VAGITA IS SUCH A NASTY BASTARD. When R u going to write chapter 4? Please write more:D
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 15:22 EST
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great story. please continue.
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 14:42 EST
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Wow thanx for the reviews every1... 'Draci luva'? Is that you sis? Hah, couldn't resist coming over to the DBZ side, huh? Well thanx for ur review, and everyone else's!!! The update will be a little slow, sorry! I know I said I had the next chappie sorted in my head, but I've just realised the difference in planning the story and actualy writing it, it's hard! I've been having a bad time with writing the next un too, it seems that everything I write just sounds like a piece of sh*t when I read it, so... Anyway, I'm thinknig about getting a beta-reader, mabye my sis, although she doesn't really like DBZ... So if anyone's interested, and has a lot of patience, tell me! I'm not fussed about time, I just need an outsider's view/modification on my chappies cos I'm not in that good of mood and everything looks worse then it really is at this moment in time... Well, till the next chapter! C'ya, And a million thanks for reading and for you're lovely reviews! If you've got a story you'd like me to review, I'd be glad to, it's the least I could do! But you can count on an honest opinion!
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Reviewed By: Frabs! On: February 08, 2005 15:48 EST
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Oh please write the next chappie! You've caught my attention! ~Frabs!
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Title: torn
Reviewed By: fleursdelys On: February 03, 2005 02:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eh i like this fic , it's dark and oppressive, but underneath it all, point a small ray of light. you did a great job! i can only ask for a new chapter! i love bv couple!!!!
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Title: Torn
Reviewed By: draci luver On: February 01, 2005 13:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS WAS SO COOL i REALLY THINK YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE !!!!!!!!!! :P :D :)
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Reviewed By: jessie18 On: February 01, 2005 12:56 EST
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it's great to see the darker of vegeta you should post the next chapter
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Reviewed By: devinyx On: February 01, 2005 12:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I think it's great especially the rape of her. Very symbolic. You should really post the 2nd chapter to this.
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