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Title: yugiohchick
Reviewed By: yugiohchick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE, THIS IS MONDO COOL. IT'S REALLY GOOD,DARK,AND ANGSTY..... I LOVE ANGST!!!!!!!!
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Title: *Claps!*
Reviewed By: Frabjousgirl (Not signed in) On: April 26, 2005 15:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I had never thought of Vegeta that way, as someone who was never allowed to be himself and forced to change again and again to be what he needed to become. I almost feel sorry for him right now...almost. What a stupid man. You have inspired me to do a little more work on "Fever," which I will try to update as soon as possible. Please update soon! I know I'm a hypocrite, but this ficcy is just sooo good! I can't wait to find out what happens next! The detail and character development are just incredible. Me = very impressed. ~Frabs!
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Title: AUTHOR SPEAKING
Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 12:54 EDT
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Wow, thanks for the reviews guys, I'm glad the last chapter was okay, I was a bit nervous sending that one off! To nu I would like to say that I am glad you are still reading this, and enjoying it! To autumn and NSB; of course you deserve credit! Afterall, if it weren't for thsoe ideas I'm serious when I say I would not even be here! I was really stuck but your ideas set off a lightbulb in my head! Thanks again, to everyone!!!
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 09:44 EDT
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p.s. Thank you for the credit, I appreciate it, but the praise all goes to you the writer!! All we did was help you find your own creativity, like I said it is easy for me to give you ideas when I don't have to figure out how to go about it :) Just glad if I can help in some way. :)
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 09:37 EDT
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That was really insightful. You're right, how could he know who he really is? He was never allowed to become the person he wanted to be, he always had to fit some mold for somebody. Interesting thought. And I thought you did a great job with the whole "control" thing. It makes sense, if he's back to the way he was because of the spell, then is he *really* in control, or not? He seems to have really gone over the edge now with him talking to himself (although if Vegeta is not a pure candidate for multiple personality disorder, then I don't know who is, LOL!) I'm glad to see there is still a tiny bit left of the Vegeta we all know and love, but how will he break free of his prison? I'm interested to see how it will be done! :)
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Title: torn
Reviewed By: nu On: April 18, 2005 16:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you make Vegeta dark!! I mean, it's so detailed, it really frightens the daylights out of me! I's really cool, and i'm sooooooo hooked to this story. I CAN'T wait for the next chapter.PLEASE HURRY!
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Reviewed By: NSB On: April 17, 2005 22:12 EDT
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HOLY SHIT WE R IN DEEP CRAP NOW EH? HE"S TALKING TO HIMSELF!!!??? I LOVE CRAZY GETA POOH!!!!!. WOW WE R GETTING PSYCHO...LOGICAL >:) DAmn I like this chappy Thanks for the praise but u r the genius so my idea isnt all that great lol;) .Anywhoo what the hell will happen to Bulma now and Trunks for that matter will they even survived this nor will Vegetas abuse towards them will make Bulma come to the desition of taking her life along with her sons, that seems believable since Goku cant help them.Plus Vegeta's reaction because he keeps making excuses about his behavior but he knows he needs her at least in some level.(WE know he cant live with out Bulma, he'll die)I truly adore this fic and Girl i gotta tell ya im hanging on a damn thread here not knowing *sighs* UPDATE~SOON!!! PLEASE GODDD!! Let our ideas flow through ur genius mind and keep those chaps on coming , i cant wait for the make up lemon between those two...err well i hope there is one BECAUSe if THERE ISNT I'LL GO NUTS THEY HAVE TO MAKE UP DAMN IT AGGGGGGGGGGHHH!! lol LATER!!>:)
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Reviewed By: Raine123 On: April 17, 2005 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE !!!!! NOW NOW NOW!
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Reviewed By: Aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 13:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love the psychologic aspect of the chapter, it is very well done, we can easily feel Vegeta's disturbed mind, great job!
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Title: AUTHOR SPEAKING
Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 16:50 EDT
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I know I said chapter 10 would be up within five days of the last update (the end of those five days being today), but I'm a bit behind schedule. Don't worry, I've written almost all of it, so this chapter will definetly be up either tomorrow or the next day at the latest. Until then, thanks for the fantastic reviews, and enjoy the story!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 01:35 EDT
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Well, I'm so happy that I helped send WB packing! :) And I'm glad I gave you an idea that you'd like to use; it's more fun that I don't know which one it is so it will still be a surprise to me! Anyway, this was a good chapter. Kind of drawing Vegeta out and into his wild nature is giving us some good insight into his character. So evil though! Wow! It seems like whatever tenuous hold he had on that last shred of decency has been extinguished :( Poor Bulma, poor Trunks... what will break him out of this? 'Til next time...
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Reviewed By: NSB On: April 12, 2005 20:15 EDT
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I NEEDDDDDD ANOTHER CHAPPIE!!!!! :(( WAHHHHHHHH WAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! GOD!!!!!! I CANT TAKE IT!!!! I NEED IT!!!!!! POOR TRUNKSIE POO POOR BULMA CHAN AND HOW I LOVE SADIST GETA POOH!!!! >:) UPDATE ONNA IM DYING HERE LAYER
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Reviewed By: Mely On: April 11, 2005 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great as always. I'm excited to read the next chapter.
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Title: Author Speaking
Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 17:31 EDT
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Thanks for the reviews, chapter 9 will be up shortly, I promise! WB is no longer bothering me, thanks to your reviews and also thanks to Autumn and nsb, whose ideas really got my brain working! Enjoy the rest of the story guys ^_~
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 15:31 EDT
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I still think your story is great. I can't wait for another chapter.
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