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Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2012 23:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is wow what a story i do hope you will finish this one day |
Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 15:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read the whole thing in the last few hours, couldn't tear myself away, i need to know what happens next, you have to update sooooonnnn.... im on tender hooks...
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 17:27 EST
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this is one of my favorite stories, please finish it.
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Title: Terrific
Reviewed By: megan1202 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 17:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, although it is a bit darker than the fics I usually read. Is this going to be pure angst or will it be a happily ever after type deal? Either way, I can't wait to read the rest of it. (I just found it like 2 hours ago and I've already read through it.) Please please please update soon! Thanks!!
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Reviewed By: JASON E On: August 15, 2005 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoooooooohooo! keep em comming. enjoyed that one!
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Reviewed By: Trisha (notloggedon) On: August 14, 2005 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey you're back! nice to see you've updated! ^^ i wonder who will save them now. poor bulma, she'll know what happened to her son *sob* i hope Goku gets to them on time, or Vegeta snaps out of it! ah!!! i cant wait any longer. i want more!!!
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 12:13 EDT
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Yep, still reading! Didn't get an update about this new chapter though, so... didn't get to read it 'til last night when I came across it. I liked this chapter a lot! The idea that Goku & Vegeta are in a mexican stand-off is interesting. Vegeta is not stupid and has been very clever in keeping Bulma & Trunks apart. I'm sure he is very aware that he is being watched. Poor Goku. I wonder who will blink first... I also like the drama surrounding Bulma's invention (should I know what it is? I can't remember reading about an invention but it's been a while. I scanned through the past chapters but didn't see anything.) Anyway, I'm very interested in what it's all about and what it will be used for... also how Bulma might be able to use that to her advantage.
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Title: Raine123
Reviewed By: Authoress Raine [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 20:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE NOW!! NOT ENOUGH! MORE MORE MORE!
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 24, 2005 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You deserve the perfect rating for this whole story. As expected, you did a great job with this chapter. Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: NSB On: June 22, 2005 16:28 EDT
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Hon WE understand the stress so take ur time but not to long cause i"ll DIE!!!!! I thought u disapeared!! WAH!!!!!!!! GOD im so happy that u at least message us !! YAY! Keep those chapies coming woman But my real question is Will geta get some in the end of this story cause francly i dont think he will....? such a shame *sighs* Later....update soon
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Title: !!!
Reviewed By: PurrfectMissM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 08:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omgoodness! what an awesome fic! a little crazy and not the usual thing i would read...but i just couldn't help but keep on reading! i was that hooked! i can't WAIT for the next chapter! keep up the wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 13:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I said... great, incredible, brilliant, excellent ect...ect... The list is still long.
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Title: HOLY CRAP
Reviewed By: HOLY CRAP On: May 18, 2005 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap'n crap! (Got that from everybody loves raymond ^_^) Damn, Vegeta gone totally insane, and poor bulma is dieing! And poor Trunks, hope he could recooperate from that trauma! crap, crap, CRAP! We're in deep shit! (Sorry about the language!)YUGIOHCHICK :)
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Title: Weeeeeee
Reviewed By: Trisha (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 21:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Vegeta was talking to himself? That's interesting. Does that mean its not babidi? And whens he gonna be his old self again. i feel bad for trunks and bulma already. that wasnt as dark as the last chapter but i really liked it. keep it coming!!!!! UPDATE
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Reviewed By: Mely On: May 15, 2005 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things are getting quite interesting! You are doing a great job with the story.
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