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Reviewed By: jessie18 On: February 01, 2005 12:56 EST
Comment/Review:
it's great to see the darker of vegeta you should post the next chapter
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Reviewed By: devinyx On: February 01, 2005 12:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I think it's great especially the rape of her. Very symbolic. You should really post the 2nd chapter to this.
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