| "What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(wipes tears) I absolutely loved this story.
I'm sad to see it end, but it had to sometime, right?
I just wanted to say that you're a very talented writer and artist.
I can't wait to check out your future endeavors! |
Reviewed By: Typicalteen On: January 23, 2003 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love it, you've got a great plot, the story line stays strong and consistant and you are very...descriptive with the scenes. I love everything about your fanfic, you did a great job and can't wait for the final chapter...
Sincerely...A fan |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 13:56 CST
Comment/Review:
That was great! I fell behind in reading so it was nice to not have to wait on the cliffhanger, lucky for me :) I loved the ritual and the emotions that encompassed it. Beautiful job. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 13, 2003 02:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My Kami, that was so beautiful. Fantastically written as always. Damn good lemon too ^_~. I can't believe that it's coming to a close after well over a year. Bravo girl, you never cease to amaze me ^_^. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD!!! This story just keeps getting better and better!!! I LOVE IT!!!
I love the way you portray Vegeta BTW-and I'm very picky about him (even though I screw him up mysdelf sometimes). |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 11, 2003 20:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh wow! I really love this story and that last chapter was unbelievable! Can't wait til you update again, although it will sad that it has to end. |
Reviewed By: lexi On: January 10, 2003 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god totally amazing. you should be publish or sumthin |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings On: January 06, 2003 16:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Ember! Why oh why must you leave it there? You just gotta finish this one up soon. |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 21:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Noooooooo it is ending , wow the tail chapter was beautiful. |
Reviewed By: Tessa On: December 23, 2002 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm really enjoying this Fanfiction story of yours so much. I've read all of your stories before, but this is by far the best work you've ever done. Every time I get on-line, I check here to see if you've updated. You are so evil for leaving us in such suspense! I hope it's Lemonade time again. Please update soon, I implore you. It'd be like a Christmas present for all your loyal Readers/Reviewers if you'd get it out before Christmas. *Puppy dog eyes* Please? Update soon!
~Tess |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 12, 2002 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gotta love Bulma's mom. Sweet, kind and completely clueless. I also enjoyed the interaction between V/B and Kandai. Looks like Veggie was rather generous when giving her some of his power. And yes, you are evil for leaving us in suspense over what's gonna happen next. Could it be lemonade time ^_~? Guess I'll have to wait to find out. Great job Ember!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been with this story since the start...but I've never taken the time to review. It is awesome...and YOU are a genius! |
Reviewed By: ArchAngelStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 20:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Starts to cry** Why don't you update! Come on. I have to know what's going to happen next. Please... please hurry |
Reviewed By: Natz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally awesome and original way to do a B/V. It's quite inventive and you writting style is admirable. Now onto the tail ceremony! |
Reviewed By: Tiffany On: November 13, 2002 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ABSOLUTELY POSITIVLY LOVE THIS FANFICTION!!!
WOOOOOW!!! TALK ABOUT AN ADRENALINE RUSH! BUT DARN YOU AND YOUR SUSPENSE IT'S LIKE A DAMN ROLLACOASTER (but I wouldn't want it any other way, I think thats what makes it THE ABSOLUTE BEST!)I had originally read your first one (the prequel to this one) and I never knew you had a sequel, just yesterday I saw this one and I recognized your name so I began to read this one and it hit me like a ton of bricks that it was the sequel. I've been reading the whole thing since yesterday :) sure my sis got made sinced I am hogging the computer but i've been telling her about the story and now she's hooked too. so i had to read the last 12 chapters outloud to her, and were both dying to read the next chapter (tail union) so pLeAsE hUrRy!!! (but at the same time, take your time to make it a Excellent Chapter)Worthy for VEGETA ;)
Your FAN
Tiffany (& my sis Melissa) |
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