| "What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel Wings On: November 06, 2002 17:58 CST
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Ooooooo! I quiver with anticipation!!!! Please please please with a cherry on top hurry with this chappie! (but not so fast so that you don't have a crappie chappie) |
Reviewed By: ArchAngelStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 21:26 CST
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Oh man, I love this fic, and I'm glad you finally updated. I accuttly started to read this one, before I read Saiyan games. It was kinda confusing, but then I went back and read it, and now it all makes great sence. Sooooo... Have you finally at least broght my guy into exsitance? WHo's my guy? FOr all you trunks lovers out there. We're all the same, we all say he's ours, but oh well. Yes Trunks is my guy. Anyway. Thanks for updateing.
AAS |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades On: November 04, 2002 20:12 CST
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Of course I loved this chapter! It was gorgeous! I wish I could say more, but you've sucked me dry of compliments! Great work, can't wait for the next part! |
Reviewed By: Dawn Dusk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 16:56 CST
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excellent fic! ^__^ I can't wait to read the end of it!!!!!! ^__~ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 04, 2002 12:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah!! Now they've got tails (if only they could keep them permanently) and they'll be able to complete the ritual in the true saiyan tradition. This should really make Veggie happy specially knowing that it would also save Bulma's life ^_^. His attitude towards Kami and Kandai leaves alot to be desired though. Makes me wanna hit him over the head with a 40lb. string of rosary beads -_-. Great chapter Ember!! |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 11:45 CDT
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Yay! That was great! And I thought that was the end so there's the added bonus of more! (everyone cheers) Seriously, that was a very well done chapter. After everything they've been through, they deserved a happy reunion and it makes sense why Vegeta would just say "to hell with it" and show his true affection for Bulma. Awwww... |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am now satisfied. |
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude..i love this story. wow, they finally did it. and i am finally back after a long absence of reading nothing because of stupid SCHOOL WORK!! boo...ok well i love this, as i love all of your fics. bravo dear!! ^^ i can't wait to see what happens next in this story...is it almost over i guess.... >_ |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful.... I've waited so long for this chapter. Well written. Still trying to catch my breath. Is there more trouble on the horizon?
It's a shame you had to post two different chapters, because of Xing. But I'm glad you did.
Waiting......... |
Reviewed By: Loved it! On: September 26, 2002 18:18 CDT
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Ah man! I'm glad you can still read the good stuff on Media Miner:-) |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a real shame that Vegeta couldn't have the tail union after all, but damn, that was a really good lemon!! It was well worth the wait, ember and I really don't mind waiting a while for the next chapter (I think this one will hold me for a while) :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 26, 2002 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG What a chapter!! Veggie has finally come to terms with his feelings for Bulma, not in a resentful manner but more calming like. His realization that the ritual almost took their lives (in particular the life of the woman he loves), and the regret of not being able to perform the tail union was somewhat sad. By the way the tail ritual is something I'd love to read about. Sounds pretty naughty to me ^_~. Anyway, I guess he had to resign himself to the fact that Vegetasei had been gone for a long time and he had been trying to hold on to its traditions and customs in an unrealistic way. Poor guy, you got to feel bad for him. Of course, the much anticipated lemon was awesome. You have a way of making their union seem so much more meaningful than lot of others that I read here and there. Usually I'm left with tears in my eyes because they're not only romantic and emotional, but spiritual in a way that would make most women wish they could experience something like that at least once in their lives *sighs*. Did that make any sense at all? Also, please don't apologize for taking a long time to update. I would wait 6 months for a chapter like this one. Kudos for such an excellent chapter and I'll be waiting patiently for the next one. Bravo girl!!
suenami927@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 13:55 CDT
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Goodness, gracious, that Goku and his appetite! LOL. This chapter was well worth the wait, don't worry about it! It was so nice to see Vegeta really caring about someone else. Let's hope his efforts can pull her out. With all of this excellent drama, I'm pulling for a happy reunion =) |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 11:32 CDT
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Ohhh! Great chapter, as usual. I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's all that I'm going to say for now because this chapter is too good for words. I just hope Bulma will make it. |
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