| "What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: September 05, 2002 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks so much for taking the time to update. I know how hectic things are at the beginning of the school year. If it weren't for my coffee I'd probably end up in the local nut house. This chap was certainly worth waiting for. I can't believe Goku and his saiyan appetite when a life is hanging in the balance. Veggie has done all he can for B-Chan and I love it when he finally admitted to himself that he loves her *sighs*. I just hope that it isn't too late for her and that Kami can come up with something that will help B/V out. Again, Kudos for a chap very well done. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 06:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, don't sweat it, buddy!!! This chapter was most definitely worth the wait. Brilliant as always, I just hope that Vegeta can save Bulma in time...:) |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2002 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey now! Vegeta just won, and now you got Bulma dieing. I can't take the suspence! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, you just think you're too clever don't you? With this newest cliffhanger...ugh!
This was a terrific chapter...I'm glad the guardian and vegeta came to an understanding...the fight was awesome, several very cool twists.
Now just get Geta outta there so he can save the woman he loves right?
: ) Jada |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Curse you woman! What happens next?!
Hehe...that's DJ's way of saying it was an incredible chapter. Not that I expected any less, of course. ;) But don't leave us hanging for too long!!!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 12, 2002 08:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes, that was a mean place to leave it :) But that's okay. This chapter was intense!! I'm never disappointed in the twists & turns you add to the story. Now Bulma's in trouble... Sheesh. Hurry up and wake up Vegeta!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 12, 2002 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn cliffhangers!! OMG I hope the doctor can get Bulma to start breathing again. At least that worthless bastard is dead. That's what happens when you mess with the Prince of all Saiyans ^_^. Kudos on a great chap but I need mmmooorrreee!!! |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2002 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Good:Vegeta won
The Bad:Bulma stopped breathing
The Hopeful:Her survival |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: August 14, 2002 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't mean to sound rude or anything, but i'm so glad you finally updated! i was beginning to loose hope! and indeed, that WAS a very evil place to end the chapter! please, oh please update soon!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: yume On: July 27, 2002 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah!! the suspense is really killing me!! What a creative fanfic! =] |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 25, 2002 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Intriguing! Will Vegeta understand the messages in time?? We will have to wait until your next update! Aah! Love this story. |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: July 24, 2002 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story even when finished, will remain one of my real favorites...
This chapter was excellent.
Please don't let him torture himself for too much longer...it breaks my heart.
Jada |
Reviewed By: jewelsunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 14:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
very kool |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awsome. I hope Vegeta wins. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 01:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
you know.. I'm thinking.. that sentance is not going to work... if you want to live.. no I think a better sentance would have been.. Turn off your scouter if you want to WIN.. then he might actually do it *HEHEHEH* |
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