| "Primal Urges" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: NewUnshelteredLife On: September 27, 2005 14:23 CDT
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I hope you've not given up on these stories. I'm anxious to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: himejima kei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, just had to review to tell you I love your story thus far and can't wait for more. You make Gohan and Trunks sound insanely attractive and I find myself really wanting them to work out well ^^ (oh and, I would've rated the style of writing + grammar and spelling but I don't pay much attention to that when I'm really enjoying a story ^^;)
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Reviewed By: Sierra Ruffner On: August 07, 2005 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me a while to get into, not used to reading Trunks and Gohan stories but after a while, I fell in love. Though there were parts in it where I thought Trunks should just kill Gohan and get it over with. And i'm getting this feeling that Jack person is going to be a problem (that's his name right?) but anyways. please write the next chapter soon! can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and when are you going to update The Odd Couple? It's been a while...
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Reviewed By: Saiki Akumu Stampede On: July 15, 2005 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww, poor Goku! T_T *cries* I really liked it a lot. ^__^ It was a very creative chapter. ^_^ I love the Gohan x Trunks action. ~_^
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Kaze Tsunami On: July 14, 2005 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story since chp 1 and it is amazing. YOu have a great tallent i can't wait till the ending!!!!!
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Title: Primal Urges
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 13:54 CDT
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WOW very powerful and sad.my heart went out to Goku. i only wish gohan can forgive his dad. and michael i don't trust him, he gives me the creeps..can't wait to read whats going to happen next...
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Reviewed By: NewKitty On: June 28, 2005 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, they finally made up!
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Title: Primal Urges
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 06:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
He said *I love you* wow so whats next for these two. Great chapter can't wait to read what happens next..^.^
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Title: more
Reviewed By: 555jazz555 On: June 24, 2005 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore more more more more more.PLEASE WRITE AS MUCH CHAPTERS AS YOU CAN SOON.no rush.HURRY UP AND WRITE.
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Reviewed By: NewKitty On: June 13, 2005 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*biting at fingers* Please end the angst! It's killing me!
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Title: niiiiiice ;)
Reviewed By: gohan loves trunks On: June 09, 2005 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the most orginal story i have ever read and i looooooved it, i hope that you will update soon and i wonder what will happen to trunks and gohan, will they be together again or not??? hmmm i wonder and i got sooo mad at trunks when he tried to choke poor trunksie, awwww i hope that they will kiss and make up ;) please update very soon and i promise i will review, i´m waiting byeeeeee.
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Title: Primal Urges
Reviewed By: Maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 09:50 CDT
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Wow i just read this story in a day and i have to say is that i know i'm still not off this rollacoster yet. What a story you have here Jana and i'm glad i'm reading it. You have something here thats worth continuing to the fullest. I love how you have put these two together and how it's still growing. you make me feel like i was apart of this couple and how i want to grab gohan and slap the shit out of him, but i so understand how he feels about his dad. Please cont to write your stories and i'll try to get to the rest of them *HUGS* Maria...
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Title: *laughter*
Reviewed By: Dharmaserenity - the author On: May 11, 2005 19:47 CDT
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[quote]OOC. ridiculously, OOC. Scenes of physical/psychological manipulation, usually provacative and wrenching, are rendered passe by the author's blase style and disgusting lack of regard for the storyline and genre. would have been better as an original story.[quote] Dear Switchblade, I've just gotta ask, "rendered passe by the author's blase style," what do you even mean by that? How is my style blase? I'd love to hear how you come up with such a description of my work. And disgusting lack of disregard for STORYLINE and GENRE? Hmm, forgive me, but isn't this fanfiction and an Alternate Universe at that? I'm quite free to do as I please in writing this fanfic. I think I've warned you well along the way as to what this fic would be about. If it wasn't your thing, why keep on reading? Obviously, your harshest point against this fic is that the subject matter is OOC, well, then you obviously don't like the direction I've taken it, so I'm not going to worry too much about your opinion of the piece as a whole. Your obvious bias negates anything constructive you may have to say. Perhaps I could have written a fic where Gohan meets this tough girl named Videl, they bicker, then compete in a martial arts competition, all the while their budding romance blooms until they eventually marry and have a daughter. Oh, wait.. Akira Toriyama already wrote all that ;). Thanks. Jana
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Reviewed By: switchblade On: May 11, 2005 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOC. ridiculously, OOC. Scenes of physical/psychological manipulation, usually provacative and wrenching, are rendered passe by the author's blase style and disgusting lack of regard for the storyline and genre. would have been better as an original story.
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Reviewed By: NewKitty On: May 04, 2005 08:33 CDT
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Aww, poor Gohan. Just wanna give him a big hug. Well, he'd rather one from Trunks but that's alright by me. All I can say is more please!! :)
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