| "Primal Urges" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: Gohan's Got Issues...
Reviewed By: cloudface85 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that Gohan has an extreme case of 'INCONSISTENT MALE ROLE-MODEL' syndrome. He probably has abandonment issues with Goku, and has since tried to replace the love he desperately needed, but rarely received, from his father with the empty sexual relationships with other men. He wants to be loved by a man, but it has progressed to a sexual nature. I'm just surprised that Gohan doesn't prefer older men. He doesn't want to be loved because he's still mourning the love he didn't receive from his father, and he subconsciously feels that if someone loves him, they'll just wind up leaving. He uses sex as a poor replacement to actual REAL love. Poor boy. There are plenty of people in this world with similar stories... He just needs to reconcile with his father in a mature manner what he feels. Oh well...like that'll ever happen. ~cloudy!~
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: cloudface85 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing isn't anything revolutionary or anything...so I gave it the highest I could give. The story itself, though, is like nothing I've ever read yet...so...10 out of 10 for that! Very good! I've never thought of Gohan as a gay slut. The way you write it makes it very easy to picture him in this way. Cool.
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG i loved this so much. This is one of the absolute best G/T I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Please keep up the good work and keep writing. I stayed up well in to the wee hours just reading this. Excellently written.
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 02:03 CDT
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*wipes tear* Hooray for happy endings! The reconciliations were heartwarming, and I'm glad everything worked out (too bad Gohan still has to wear the big glasses, though^^). Thanks so much for finishing this fic!
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Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 05:55 CDT
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I love the way you ended this and wrapped everything up. The reconciliation scene between Gohan and Goku made me go "awww" to a luckily empty house. :) (Although people should really be used to me talking to my computer by now...) This was the first fic I read of this pairing and I think it was a fantastic introduction. I'll be looking forward to reading some more of your work.
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Title: Sadden
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 11:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm happy for them both, and fro the way you ended it. I hope their will be more stories soon.
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Title: Sad
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 10:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aw i have tears in my eyes. you can feel the pain between them. Why didn't gohan try to make it up to his dad in those six months??? can't wait to read the ending. great chapter as always.
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Title: bunnicle
Reviewed By: Bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaah, poor gohan! but why hasn't he gone to see his father yet? he can't still be angry with him, can he? your gonna fix that right? And Gohan and Trunks aren't really going get a devorce, right? right? please update soon! gotta know what's gonna happen!
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 17:52 CDT
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Well done chapter! It looks like things won't work out for them in the end. I hope the long road to recovery is successful. I have ejoyed your character development and plot throught this wonderul story. I look forward the the next and final chapter. Happy writing. :-)
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS? It's good, really good. Please write more. I've got to see what Goku, Gohan and Trunks do. I'm actually curious if Bejita is going to say anything about this too. ^_^
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Title: OH MY GOD!!!
Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 07:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A DBZ FAN FIC WORTH READING!YOU HAVE TO FUCKIN' KEEP WRITTIN' IT!GOHAN HOT SEXY GOHAN WANTI' TO KILL GOKU...MAN I'M DROOLIN'!INCREDEBLE!THE BEST YAOI FAN FIC THAT I READ IN THIS SITE. AND THAT IS SAIYIN' A LOT!
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Title: Primal Urges
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 22:14 CST
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Women you and your cliffhangers are driving me crazy. Wow he has thqat much hate for his dad, in all fairness i can't blame him. I thought that maybe if they fought that they could try to work things out. Sad he had to be that way. Now enough said start writing the next chapter :P
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Title: Primal Urges
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 09:50 CST
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Wow was worth the wait. I hope now that they are fighting they can work things out. great chapter,you have me on my seat waiting to know whats going to happen next..
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Reviewed By: gaetagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 08:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know a perfect rating, but I did not stop reading until i was at chpt 16. I have yet to indulge in writing a story quite like it, but I have to admit I am enjoying the read. I love Gohan a little bad, but boy this is great. Even the Yaoi, but the way everyone reacts is just very realistic, well if your a Saiyan! I gave a perfect score mostly for the enjoyment factor that i was not reading critically, not looking for mistakes. I got into the story and i got a snese of what was playing out so any mistakes were ignored, why do people make thier worst editors?? so I saw no error that bothered me, or reconized... I look forward to reading more. GOod luck!
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Reviewed By: NewKitty On: September 30, 2005 00:21 CDT
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Okay, so I was just coming back by this evening because I can't get enough of Gohan and Trunks, when I started reading the other reviews and I got to one that made my eye start twitching. (Please note this is a very bad thing.) I know my dear friend the authoress has already made comments to the offender but it really pissed me off to read it. I felt the need to "second" Dharms defense of herself because she deserves the support. So called "reviews" like that just chap my hide. Some readers just don't seem to read warnings or story codes anymore that or they want to be offended to use as an excuse to flame. And by the way, switch, your review gave me a migraine. I also "second" the fact of having no clue as to what you actually wanted to say other than it was meant to flame. Just a little lesson for your future reference, just because you know some big words doesn't mean you know how to use them properly in organized sentence form. Like the authoress has stated, you obviously came to the story biased against such a plot and pairing to begin with. Believe me when I say that I know good writing when I read it, and Dharms is one of my favorites for a reason. Hugs and praises to Dharms!
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