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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, it was okay, you made some gramatical mistakes and all that. I was interested in the story-line though I could never see it happening. You made Sesshoumaru a bit OOC, but from the other fanfiction I've read of yours this is to be expected. In any case you did alright, not the best I've ever read and not the best I've written myself but decent all the same, remember, practice makes perfect. -hint hint- so DO remember to practice won't you?
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Title: Chapter #Second ^_^
Reviewed By: leanne0716 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed that fic. I loved the lemon which wasn't as lemony as I expected it to be but it was great all the same. Again skillfully written and masterfully detailed. I loved the ending! And note to Inu: Hahaha *jumps up and down and points at a sad-looking Inu* you didn't get any!!! ~Leanne~
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Title: Huh?
Reviewed By: leanne0716 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kind of weak??? *shocked expression* That was brilliant! Skillfully written yet with an air of modesty and the characters are portrayed so well...ugh *faints* That was an excellent first chapter and I can't wait to read the next chapter...*goes and reads next chapter...* Your BIGGEST fan, ~Leanne~
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Reviewed By: DawnGoddess87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is extremely HEARTABLE! I guess I'm a little late reviewing, but unfortunately I just now discovered your work. Wonderful lemon and a very good story. Hopefully you might just go back and turn this into a multi-chapter eh?
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Reviewed By: Blood_lust_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually I liked this story a lot and if you ever decide to expand on it I fully support the idea.... please do. As far as the lemon went I found it quite good. Its most certainly better than most I have read. In any case I wouldn't worry about it, just write them when you want to and don't care what others think because its your writing and if you like the way it turned out then thats all that matters. (god i need to take my own advice sometimes heh) But I guess that should be all for now. Happy writing. Catherine
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Reviewed By: Icy girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please.Do continue the story after finishing your Second Chance. Please????
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Title: One shot
Reviewed By: dianas_lotus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY HAVEN'T YOU FINISHED THIS STORY!!!! IT'S AWESOME...PUT SECOND CHANCE ON A BREAK FOR NOW AND FINISH THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MEAN IT!!!! WWWOOOOOWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: isina17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic!! I Loved it! and the Lemon was fine!! Wow...i'd love it if you wrote more of this story! Besitos Z.Z.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_girl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 21:19 CST
Comment/Review:
THAT COULD MAKE A REALLY GOOD STORY!! YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE!
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Title: One Shot
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um... to quote Kagome *WOW!*. That was GREAT!!! I truly enjoyed it and I hope that you will maybe add more to it, but if not, this was great all the same. Wonderful! Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 11:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it! It was ao awesome u r definitely a great author!
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Reviewed By: Arella [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! You had me hooked to the very end! Sequel? Please?
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Reviewed By: kodak On: September 11, 2005 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! I love this story does it really have to be a one shot I would like to know what happens to Kagome and Sesshomaru. Your lemon was awsome by the way very tasteful. I loved the fact that sess had never been kissed before.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: July 19, 2005 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've never given a ten on the overall rating before, but I believe you deserve it. Anyway, the plot's good, and the lemon was good, but it could use a little more . . . spice to it. I think that would attract more attention if you write another lemon. But, other than that, the story's fine. Oh, and if you're going to continue, please update as soon as possible! Ja! ^_~
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