| "To Serve and Protect" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2011 11:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this story a little while ago and I loved it. Such a original story and was so good to follow. |
Title: omg
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2010 22:02 EDT
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so i never got to read to the end oin the first place... but now I did and it was le awesome! I also finished TPTP and what you have of the sequel. might start on the Sampson Effect now that I think about it... and my name showed up in thanks! wah! *wibbles*
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Reviewed By: charfan On: May 06, 2009 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooooow! I couldn't believe it was over when I read the last sentence! You wrapped it up nicely, but the ending was exciting all the same. Now, I can't help but imagine Joey and Seto as snarling dogs. Snarl snarl snarl
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 15:50 EDT
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i love your story it's the perfect mix of fun and seriousness. keep up the good work on your next story
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Reviewed By: KikyoJagana On: March 02, 2007 17:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! this is really great. sorry i did not sign in i'm lazy. Keep writting stories like this!
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty (who has long since forgotten her password) On: April 12, 2006 23:05 EDT
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It's been forever, but I finally got to finish reading this. I'm so sorry that I dropped off the face of the earth, but I've been caring for a parent. Real life sucks. Just wanted you to know that I still love this story and how you portrayed Seto and Jou. Great work!
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Reviewed By: slash_glory [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 12:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, I'm sad to see this fic come to an end. Wah. Anyways, I wanted to be a goof and thank you for thanking me for reviewing, lol. I'll be sure to check out some of your other fics, especially if you say you're gonna write some GW fic. Oh yes. Ciao!
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Title: I hate to see it end!!
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 08:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this since you first posted it and I really hate to see it end. Maybe you can do a sequel and show Kaiba and Joey having a kid, maybe by surrogate or magic> I would love to see the others featured too. Anyway this was awesome and I wonderfu read.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Darkladyknight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 21:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this, It was orginal and well, it only took me two staight days to read it. Once I started I hated to stop. I found it relistic, and liked that you knew what you were taking about and making it up as you went along. Research I've always found fun, at least it's learning new thing. I also like the fact that you inculed links to some things to support what you were telling. It helps, expectial for those nit pickers, I'm not one but I know several. The story line was good, the flow was even better. It spread it out enough that nothing happened ahead of time, and it never got boring or repeative. again, it was a great story, good growth on the charcters. I liked seeing Joey like this, I've always believed he was a strong character. Seto seemed out of character a few times, but when you take the whole story into content I can that. I know I would be freaked if it was me. Okay enough of my babble, thanks again for sharing such an instering and engaging story. Dark.
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Reviewed By: Ishizu Isis Ishtar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 17:30 EDT
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Only one more ... but ... but ... STUPID OLD LADIES!!! I always knew getting old was evil but still ... ick hate old ppl sometimes. They think their so smart and know it all just because the've lived for like billions of years ... and look what happens because of them ... only one more chapter. Well I'm sure the last one will be the best of them all, but for now I'm just gonna go and cry and pout that its basically all over. Thank you. Isis.
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Reviewed By: slash_glory [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Wow. I had this fic saved in my faves for a while, but it wasn't until I got an email update that I decided to reread it. Oh man, I'm glad I did. This fic is reeeeeeeeeally good. Although the old lady wasn't introduced until later chapters, I really thought that Torrance had something to do it with it. His physical appearance & mannerisms totally had me thinking something along the lines of Phantom of the Opera. You know, how the Phantom's all controlling, not wanting Christine to go anywhere outside of the opera house. Anyway, I started this fic like two days ago, and all I've done since then is read this fic, go to school & work, come home & read some more, lather, rinse, repeat...etc. lol A bit sad to see the end of a good fic, but the ride is really what counts. Good job. *applauds*
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Title: Happy
Reviewed By: Aots On: October 02, 2005 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! All that drama over an old bat! I was so impressed, and I would be lying if I didn't say that I might have snickered a bit over the culprit. I couldn't help it! It was just amusing... and I agree with the police work bit, it's not all "gun shooting" and street talking like in the movies or TV. I loved the reality view point it was great! I was so excited when this chapter came up but when I found out that your next posting is going to be the epilogue... I don't know, I just felt kinda depressed, I loved this story so much, and to know that it's ending... it leaves a depressive sigh in my throat. I can't wait for your epilogue, I'm sure it will be great and that it will be an awsome finish! I also hope you'll think about writting more SetoxJounouchi fics, because this one was awsome! You're a really good author, have you ever thought of getting published?
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 09:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really anticlimactic. What a ditz she is. I can't wait to see Seto's surprise for Joey. THis is a really wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 01:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I am so glad you updated. I wait for them. Great job.
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Reviewed By: madame shannon On: September 11, 2005 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
salutations! hey i'm still totally in luv with this story. i'm glad that it is comming to a close but at the same time just the thought of it ending makes me somewhat sad. *sniff sniff* thank you so much for your work and keep writting. you are very good at it. @--^---
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