| "To Serve and Protect" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 08:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. I find myself just wanting more. I hate to see it end.
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Reviewed By: Yakari Taito (not signed in) On: March 04, 2005 15:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I would love it if you made the pairing JoeyxSeto! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: March 04, 2005 07:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good chapter. I must admit that I like the idea of a Joey/Seto pairing more them Joey/Mai cause you don't get the same squabbling and temper tantrums that make them a good couple ^_' Anywho please update soon.
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Reviewed By: id On: March 03, 2005 23:48 EST
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Whoo! keep on going! please keep the couple kaiba and Jou. much better. thanx.
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW long chapter. The pairings note at the bottom? I admit it. I'm a sucker for JoeyxSeto. Mai.. I'm not such a big fan of. The interactions are amazing. I seriously didn't want the chapter to end. The way Seto finally came around. Good job. It's nice to read a story where there aren't any short cuts (ie; argue, argue, hop into bed, everything's sunshine). The blow up and Seto smacking him. I really thought Joey'd deck him.
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Reviewed By: jezabel1971 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 11:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I don't often write reviews, but I wanted to let you know that I am thoroughly enjoying your writing and your characterizations. Joey is one of my fav characters and you write him as very believable. Oh, and I'm also enjoying your GW fics. I recommended this story to a friend of mine and she's looking forward to reading it, but she had to read the GW fics first! Anyway, fantastic writing and I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 22:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, and it gets better with every chapter! Okay, I admit it. I did google shibari. Eye opening to say the least. Nah, not offended at all. Trust me. I can't wait to see what's going to happen in the next chapter. You're weaving such an interesting tale.
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Reviewed By: Yakari Taito (not signed it) On: February 27, 2005 08:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I can't wait intil you update again! ^_^
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 04:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I love it and I don't think either Joey or Seto are OOC. I can totally see Joey jumping into something like this.
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Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: February 24, 2005 17:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Good story. Its so hard to find a good Joey/Seto story that gives Joey the credit he deserves. Joey rocks! Keep writting and please update soon
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 10:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like the beginning you've got going. I can't wait to see where you take this story. So far it's cracked up to be a pretty good ride.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 08:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love Joey's character. Seto doesn't know what he's getting into yet.
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Reviewed By: Ishizu Isis Ishtar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 00:38 EST
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dont have much time gotta finish before the prof notices i'm messing around online but... more and soon please!!!!! isis.
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Reviewed By: QAHLuver! On: February 19, 2005 13:04 EST
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You write the characters so well. I love this story. Keep it up!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 21:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this and find the characters completely believable. I can totally see Joey acting like this. I loiok forward to more on this story.
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