| "To Serve and Protect" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it when they snarl at each other. It's nice to see that Seto isn't babying him even though he will bellow the roof down to care for him. *snerk* Joey, lady of the house's room... *laughs* Seto would notice that Joey's pants were too loose in the butt. Loved the interaction between them in bed (and wow, that sounded wrong). *raises hand* VW bug, bus or Jetta? *smirks* Couldn't help that. Whoa, Joey falling on Roland and exclaiming about needing food... that sounded like the "old" Joey!! "Yeah" *cackles* Horse Killer... oh my god. Nirvana in a cup!! I just hope my cholesterol test survives the two Milky Ways I had this week! (yup, you created a monster) Seto, film wrap *falls over laughing* Ass, nice *cackles* yup, 'tis. Eats everything, losing weight. He almost sounds like he's got tapeworm. Love Seto's reaction to the million dollars and a sports car. Joey a lawyer. Man, him arguing cases. That'd be something. Ohhh Seto didn't know about the prize money. Bet he hated chewing on his foot. Great idea about making sure Tea, Serenity and Joey's mom have copies of his service reports. I hope Tea chokes on it. OOOO Tickle Attack! *falls over laughing* Perfect ending to the chapter.
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Reviewed By: dinkscythe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very immersive; the series of events and incidentally recalled history just flows and flows. Unpredictable. Intriguing characterizations. I like the interactions between everybody.
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Reviewed By: Luana Tala On: April 07, 2005 14:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I love the way this story flows in after the actual series is over and introduces an original plot, not a rehash of something that already happened.
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Reviewed By: maggiemay On: April 07, 2005 13:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Engrossing, Absorbing, highly enjoyable and entertaining. I love it...I love the way you are keeping us in suspense. There is no clearcut ending...and although there is clear clues to the baddie...I think I know, but am by no means sure. Please update soon. Maggiemay
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 05:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. It is great to see Seto tiptoeing around Joey. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 04:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great and getting better. There is a great plot and the twists and turns are exciting. Update soon.
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Title: This just gets better and better!!
Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 15:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Question! What exactly does Seto consider too much coffee? *snickers* Joey drinks less than I do. *blinks innocently* Hug-me jacket... My friends and I call straight jackets "hug-me" jackets. Yes I know, bitten by the babble bug. The interactions just keep getting better. No, I don't just mean between Seto and Joey (although the fangirl in me loves that), I mean how he reacts to everyone. The scenes with him, Tristan and Yugi are fantastic. You've got a really good grasp on the stress he's under, what he's dealt with and how he's trying to cope now. I loooooved how Seto handed Tea her head (can't stand her for the most part). I was surprised though - I made the assumption Yugi and Tris were a pair (fangirl again, sorry). The way Tris tried to warn Seto was funny. I think Seto's the only link Joey's got to sanity. *laughs* Inu-chan... priceless!! Seto's never going to live down his cooking skills. *snickers* I know a guy who used to be able to make a fabulous ER Chicken - he undercooked it and that's where everyone ended up. Tristan giggling like a girl - that was such a weird visual! *G* That comment about wrestling the thought... didn't Joey say something like that to Seto earlier? Can't wait to read about that play on words! Golden ball had me howling.
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Reviewed By: koalared On: April 01, 2005 13:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I told you over at the other site, I love this fic. It's awesome. Now that Joey has made up with Yugi most of the loose ends are cleaned up, maybe he can work on himself. It looks like a melt down is getting close. I loved the knife scene, I've always seen Joey as handling a knife well. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: katami fox On: March 31, 2005 04:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. I can't believe I didn't find it before now. Please write more and update soon, I love reading this story.
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Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: March 31, 2005 02:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story rocks! Please update soon. (Congrads on updating really quickly.)
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 03:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm torn. I want to know what happens but I don't want it to end either. I would like to see Yugi and Joey make up. Great story.
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Reviewed By: serpent_empress On: March 25, 2005 11:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You are at chapter 8 and I am wondering how this story was able to slip past me for so long. I really, really like it. Although I can't decide about who I am more worried, Joey is...see I suffer from the same problem as our heros, can't tackle that thought^_^ I really can't wait to see what else you have in store, is the stalker soemone we know already or a new character? I am quite curious, but I guess you won't tell. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: Assassin of the Shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 19:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah! Everything was great! I loved it all, I'm so happy you updated!! I know it sounds bratish, but now I want to know more! We're finally seeing some relationship improvement (by the way, I nearly died laughing over Seto's motorbike confession) and I'm loving every minute of it! I can't wait for more, I'm so curious as to what's going to happen next! Keep writing~! - Assassin of the Shadows
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: March 24, 2005 12:05 EST
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I loved this chapter so much. That ending was great and the joke was amazing. i couldn`t stop laughing.
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 11:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! It keeps getting better and better.
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