| "To Serve and Protect" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 09:44 EDT
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Great update. I am continually amazed at all the details you put in. I will be sad to see it end. I know all stories must come to an end but I will still be sad. I love it. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 16:34 EDT
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This is wonderful. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: JonoKai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my RA DONT STOP NOW!!!!!!! Ok, I know personally how long it takes to write a story and I commend you on your diligence. I just spent the last 3 days reading this non-stop. Congrats. It takes a lot to hold my attention. But you have me drooling. *chains you to a desk and computer* WRITE... NOW. kidding.. I cant wait for the next chapter. I want to know the ending but I want it to last too. If this wasn't a fanfic I would tell you to have it published. Maybe you can clean it up later and do that hmm? Well, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 15:46 EDT
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I am so sorry I am late in reviewing. I have been so busy and Mediaminer has stopped sending me notices of updates. I love this story and love the updates. This is one of my very favorites and I feel like crap for not reviewing earlier. It is an awesome story and has wonderful details and great research. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: DSK On: July 24, 2005 01:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfiction is well planned out, highly intruguing, and very original. I commend you for such a superb job, and I look forward to reading more, along with your other works. You could go far in this line of work if you wanted, and I am amazed at your knowledge on many things mentioned in your story. Many I suggest you use substitute works more often, synonyms, tbut that is just a suggestion, that I doubt you need. Thank you for your time. Sinverly, Daisuke_Shadow_Kitsune
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Reviewed By: sarahmad13 On: July 16, 2005 08:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much. Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner. I love how you developed a sorta of codependecy relationship between the two. One is always there to take care of the other in there moments of need. Please keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 03:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Poor Seto that was so shocking. I am so glad it wasn't really Mokuba's head. Joey knows who it is they are going to be really, really sorry. Can't wait to see what Joey does to them. This is a really wonderful story.
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Title: Finally Reviewed
Reviewed By: elfstone1035 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 12:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawasaki Super-Shocky Dirt Bike! (Mr. Kawasaki made me think of that) I've been reading this for a very long time. Haven't reviewed yet and I realized that I should. I'm very impressed with the story. You don't see many well-written J/S stories. Especially with all the detail and knowledge put into it. The only thing that's bugging me is the Letter Man. I want him gone (but of course, he's the whole plot so he can't be gone too fast) There's also a real relationship. Not a "hey lets screw like bunnies because we just hooked up." (Although, those are sometimes nice too.) I really am looking forward to future chapters, and I hope that you don't abandon the story at an point. (Not that it looks like you will =D) Much love from The Elfstone~~~
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 05:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this. I am so glad youa re updating quicker again. I can't wait to see what happens next. Wonderful, I can't think of anything else to say. It's just so great.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 03:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. At least Seto is getting serious about guns. I love seeing him submissive then forceful. I love this story.
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Title: Whoo hoo!
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 18:29 EDT
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Well, Yanagi, I just caught up on this, and I like it a lot. Keep up the good work, and keep the characters quirky... okay?
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Reviewed By: madame shannon On: June 25, 2005 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i started this fic and read the entire thing in one sitting. i also give it the highest of all high praises. now i know that my opinion may not mean much to most ppl but my friends are always telling me that i am way too picky abt my fanfiction and well....like i said wow. you manage to peak ppls interest right away and keep it, thats something that not many authors can do. you also kept the characters true to them selves, witch i thank you for. bravo, you deserve a rose @---^----
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 08:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love seeing Seto humbled. He deserved more than a spaking for what he did to Joey! I sure it was psychologically more effective than anything else. Joey as a great game designer, I love it. Seto will learn to handle guns if it kills him, with Joey's method. I am sure it is the most effective way. He shouldn't go back to the police, I hope they offer him the moon and would love to see their faces when he turns them dow. Great work. Love the research and time and effort you put into this.
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Reviewed By: aliascatts On: June 05, 2005 09:26 EDT
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Oh My now that was a treat! Absolutly wonderful, the way that you write is loaded with imagery. I really like the matching earings.....yummy. I am looking forward to the next chapter if MM will let me find it. I can't wait to see what Mokie will do next to the Department especially scince Tanaka and the Comish were at the fight. I look forward to the next installment....L8r Catts
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 23:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gonna try this. If it doesn't work, I'll email it. "And we'll rub their noses in how a prime fighter like you should be treated." Ooo perfect!!! Joey's gi *Kitty drools* Sounds beautiful. Joey telling Seto how to handle those people... *cackles* Joey, don't teach your grandma to suck eggs... "What do I get for . . . say . . . a bracelet?" "My ass." *falls over laughing* He's such a stinker! *drools* caviar. Yumm! Oh wow, the fight. Fantastic job writing it!! *laughs* I loved Seto's message too. I knew Yugi wouldn't be able to watch. Oh well, he showed and that's what counts. The convo with Seto and Narita was a wonderful dance itself. *groans* Gods, I'm craving caviar now. You evil creature you!! "Only barbarians offend the taste of caviar by overlaying it with that junk. Or else they're only eating it because it's expensive and they want to show off." YES!!! I'm not the only one who eats it naked! *blinks* And that so came out wrong. "Me? Perish the thought." *Kat chokes on her drink* OOOOOOOO Watanabe lost face big time! I LOVE IT! Dayum, that is fresh seafood. Hell, now I want sashimi. You're hell on my diet. *G* Damn, great ending. Loved it. Was great to finally get a chance to sit down and read it!
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