| "To Serve and Protect" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: Assassin of the Shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 19:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah! Everything was great! I loved it all, I'm so happy you updated!! I know it sounds bratish, but now I want to know more! We're finally seeing some relationship improvement (by the way, I nearly died laughing over Seto's motorbike confession) and I'm loving every minute of it! I can't wait for more, I'm so curious as to what's going to happen next! Keep writing~! - Assassin of the Shadows
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: March 24, 2005 12:05 EST
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I loved this chapter so much. That ending was great and the joke was amazing. i couldn`t stop laughing.
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 11:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! It keeps getting better and better.
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 22:58 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot damn, an update! Love the new chapter. That detective was a moron! No one draws on an UC like that. Not unless he really does wanna get shot! He would have so deserved the bullet. Ohhhhhh Seto's reason for faking his riding ability had me laughing hysterically! Kudos to him for being the first to admit his attraction. Joey getting even in the capsule was priceless. Okay, Letter Man is just scary. That note freaked me out. Fortress? Oooo that is gonna be cool!!! Great work, as usual!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 03:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work. All I can say is hurry up and get back to this story.
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Title: Damn!
Reviewed By: Ishizu Isis Ishtar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 00:32 EST
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Wait?!?!?!??!?!?! No you cant do that to us. Its cruel and inhuman.... ok I guess its livable just cuz its such a great fic but I'm gonna be dying here waiting to find out what's next. Blessed Be, Isis.
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Reviewed By: Yakari Taito (not signed in) On: March 16, 2005 00:31 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this fic! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 23:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*finally remembers to blink* WOW... You just keep getting better and better with this. Those tapes... *shudders* I don't blame Seto for his reaction. I did like how Joey dealt with the rookie. That was GOOOOOD! Oh and what Seto did when he got to Tanaka-san's office. Damn, that was just fantastic. I gotta wait for the next chapter. I can safely say that it is going to be difficult to wait. Usually I can be patient, but not with this story. Fantastic job!
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Title: AOTS
Reviewed By: Assassin of the Shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 20:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, when I started on chapter six my heart sank because I found out this was your last update. I really like what you got going on in this story, the character development, the background detail, it shows you put some real thought into this story, maybe even did extra research to make it even better and I admire that. Another thing I loved was Joey's slip-ups, every time he tries to tell Kaiba something about himself he almost gives himself away causing him to stumble over his words and later end in a profanity -chuckles- I just enjoyed reading those parts because they're something I see everyday, most stories I read where the character stumbles over themsleves it doesn't flow out smoothly. Hehe, anyway, I'll quit pestering you for now, just taking time out to tell you I have read everything you uploaded so far (I hate the lack of reviews you seem to receive in M.org, but it shows you the "hits" so I guess that kinda makes up for it...) and I'm hoping your next update is coming in the near future, I can't wait to read more, and I hope the next chapter is just as long (or maybe longer) as your previous one! Luck and Good Health for you! Assassin of the Shadows
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too tired to log in) On: March 12, 2005 16:24 EST
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this is getting more and more interesting. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 03:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Joey seems likes he's ready to explode soon. I love this story. Great ideas. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 02:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just fantastic. Every chapter has been a blast to read. I just about cheered when Seto got him to duel again. When Seto ran across that documentary on American prisons... dayum, I knew he'd see him. *cackles* The different descriptions about how they keep tip-toeing around each other were just hysterical. Kudos to you for coming up with so many different ones. I absolutely love how complex you make them. It's wonderful to read a story like this! I swear, I almost ignored the stuff I *had* to do, just so I could read the newest chapter.
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 18:52 EST
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This is incredible, you really do your research, I only write what I know. Go you. Keep up the great work.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: ( bookwormloverjen ) On: March 09, 2005 13:15 EST
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plz keep it up
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Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: March 09, 2005 08:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! New chapter. This story just leaves you eanting more! Please update soon. Great chapter
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