| "The Price They Paid" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 07:01 CDT
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Finally having a chance to read this, it is quite good, I like how you touch on each main character and are rounding out their characters. thanks for sharing D
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Reviewed By: Bobbi On: June 01, 2007 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote a awesome story! Great ideas and follow-thru! The _only_ thing that I noticed that might be wrong... was the "morris" code. If your talking about what I think you are, it should be Morse code. Otherwise... GREAT JOB! I love it! Can't wait for more!
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Title: Cliffy Ending.....O.o
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 14:36 CDT
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You are So EVIL! Cliffy Endings?! *sigh* But I have to admit I loved it. ^_^ So Relena is free, Milliardo and Duo are space bound, and Heero and Wuffers are still mudball bound... You know you have a dedicated reader waiting excitedly for the next arc in this awesome, Awesome storyline! Tora and I both are cheering for ya. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 20:13 CDT
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Wonderful resolution to the situation with a great bit of humor thrown in! I was so wrapped up with Duo and Wufei, then Heero gets a ticket! I wonder where the cop would have left it on Wing if Heero hadn't come out? It's great to know there'll be more to the story continued as a separate arc. There's so much left to tell!
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Reviewed By: Random Chaos On: May 19, 2007 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1) love this story 2) good, you are writing a second part 3) Heero gets tickedted. That just made my day. 4) enjoy the interaction of all the characters, Main and OC.
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Title: the pain ... I loved it
Reviewed By: Tina01 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved each cap that you wrote and this last... Oh my God!!!1 Poor Wuffy, Zechs, Heero and Duo You messed too much with them... But I'ww be waithng for the second part bercause you will show us what happened with all of them... Kisses and Hugs Tina
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Title: Dun, Dun, DUN!!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 01:11 CST
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That was incredibly ominous. I'm not sure what to make of the chains and WuFei offering himself up like bacon on a platter... The N-Gundams are the BOMB though! It's SO sweet!! Tora and I had been batting it back and forth about whether we thought you'd actually put something like that in. I think it's just awesome! Now there's no reason that they can't take on the world! Just like old times..... Can't wait till the next fantasic chappie! Keep it up! Neku ^_^
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Reviewed By: SisterRaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 07:07 CST
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Well, that was a horribly evil and ominous place to leave off. I know muses cannot be easily compelled, but I do hope yours takes prodding well. Consider this my poke at your muse to give you more of this fic to share. Thank you very much for this, and I'm looking very much forward to seeing more.
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Title: the price that they paid
Reviewed By: Tina01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I I never did a review for yours Fics but I love too much this one so when I read that you had post a cap. here I couldn't Help Because I need to say that fic is winderful and I will be waiting the next caps Thank you so much Kisses and Hugs Tina You are a greate writter so please keep sharing your talent with us
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Reviewed By: tonik On: February 24, 2007 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your writing. I can't wait until your next chapter. I hope Wufei doesn't have his bleeding ulcer (or whatever it is) go bad while in chains...... looking forward to your next update!
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Title: Queen to Rook 1
Reviewed By: BakaTora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 21:19 CST
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Well, another chappie poasted, another chappie read. And yet again, Awesome! They're finally running out of idiots and peons at the campsite. At this rate, people are actually going to start staying out of the way and letting the Gundam Guys just do their thing. ^_^ I'm curious about Duo's itchy issue too. Is there something more planned? Or is it just the part about the prisoners wanting a pilot? (As if that isn't bad enough...) The prisoners should let the negotiators talk to Relena as a good faith that she's not hurt. A good vid of her ought to raise a ton of angst in the Guys. (insert evil grin here) OK, gotta go. Eagerly awaiting more (like always). Neku ^_^,,,
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Title: YAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 03:20 CST
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OMG! You are such a F*cking TEASE!!!!!!!!! But I love ya for it! (batts eyes) This has all the earmarks of WW4 and it's about to BLOW UP!~ I can't wait! As per typical, I love how you write these guys. It's got all the new storyline, but all the same feel of the characters. It's wonderful. I feel like I just a got a present when I saw the e-mail notice. ^_^ I can't wait to see what you have Duo doing....I'm sure it's gonna be devilish. (evil grin) Shinigami + The Perfect Soldier = Dead Oz Eagerly awaiting the big boom-booms, Neku ^_^
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Reviewed By: forever_rootless [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 08:54 CST
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really good storyline wanna know more! can't wait to see what transpires next.
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Reviewed By: evalhanne [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally awesome . . . I read it at work, at home . . . whenever I could. I just finished it this morning. I like seeing them go to therapy, having flashbacks, still gun shy (hair triggered) . . . it makes them so much more realistic. I can't wait for you to update this!
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Title: The Price They Paid
Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and am so glad you have updated. I really look forward to your writing more. Please keep it up....
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