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Title: HAHAHAHA! (chap.1)
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: April 08, 2006 10:54 CDT
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"one but a tiny pooch of his lover lip" best typo ever... Great story so far, I just that that was highly amusing... I'll review again should I finish.
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Reviewed By: Escapee On: March 07, 2006 20:29 CST
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Interesting. I can't wait until the next chapter. However I thought Duo would be more forgiving then he is. In the Blind Target manga, they decribe him as being kind, optimistic, and having a good-natured generosity. Though they did try to have him executed, so that could put a damper on things.
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Title: Bloody Well Brilliant!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 08:06 CST
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My Gods, but I haven't had the time to properly give this fic the time it deserves. I've just caught up and WOW! I Love everything about it! The budding romance between WuFei and Zechs is positively cute. (And yes, I still consider it budding.) The more you write about Duo and Heero, the more I love them too. Binky is adorable and I love Heero's interaction with her. I believe she could be therapuetically good for them all, especially Heero. I think the thing about kids between WuFei and Zechs was intriguing. And the thing with Relena...you make me wonder....but I'll just content myself to see if my theories and hunches are correct. I'm waiting with baited breath for the next installment. By the way, did you borrow my cliffy beast? Or do you have her twin? ^_~ NekuYasha
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Reviewed By: Kourutusunie (not logged in) On: March 02, 2006 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was a little weary of this fic in the beginning. I was thinking oh here's another prison story but I gave it a shot. I really enjoyed the first....12-15 chapters of the story. It began to pull away from me after Heero finally met up with Duo. I just wasn't feelin it after that. I went from lovin it to skimming through the last few chapters. I wish you the best of luck in writing it but I dont know if I'll be continuing this fic. Not to say that you aren't a good writer, which you are. You just lost my interest after a time.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy not signed in On: February 21, 2006 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So cute! Duo saved a puppy! Yay! Sorry I took so long to review!
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Reviewed By: SisterRaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 23:04 CST
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Okay, I'm not rating it, but I wanna say, Woo-Hoo, another chapter! Thank you! This story is going along so well - I can't wait to see what job Zechs and Heero get, since both Duo and Wufei are already the cheifs of security. Anyway, I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: dk_joy not signed in On: February 03, 2006 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Poor Mick! But I'm glad he got to walk the Leo again. The boys worked so hard on it that it would have been horrible if he would have died before he got a chance to. I can't wait to see what will happen next, so please keep going and update soon!
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Title: Wonderful! ^_^
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 05:53 CST
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OK. Two more chappies all at once...Awesome! I think the whole Leo project is good busy work for the guys. And I love how you use it for personal interaction between the guys. That is always some of my favorite parts of your chappies, the interaction. I love seeing Heero and Duo together;you write them so cute. And watching things play out between Zechs and Wufei is just hilarious! The kink, the flirting, the fact that they're both suffering because they're just being too stand-offish...too funny. The morning grumpies don't raise their head if you've had a good piece. ^_~ I couldn't help laugh at Duo's reaction to Une. She would be his worst nightmare. I don't have a problem with fics where the G-guys are preventers (I've written a few of them), but I just don't think they're ready for that yet. Maybe eventually, but I dunno. I really like them all together right where they are. ^_^ And that little shit-head had better get loads of juvie time, along with a NICE news piece on the G-guys for their part in helping. Delightedly awaiting more chappies! ~NekuYasha
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Reviewed By: SisterRaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 22:48 CST
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Was originally reading this over at Calic0cat's site - thanks for telling me where the rest was! Okay, wow! I'm really really enjoying this! Thank you so much for sharing this story. I especially like how you're handling the whole flash-back issue, and that you aren't trying to make them all Preventers. I mean, with Une ordering Duo's death during the war, how could he ever trust her as a CO? Anyhoo, please please please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: dk_joy not signed in On: January 08, 2006 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story totally rocks, but you knew that already, didn't you? I love it and can't wait until you update again! That was a lot to update all at once, but I'm really glad you did! Please keep writing this story - it's one of my favorite Gundam stories and I can't wait to see what else you'll have the boys do and deal with!
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Title: ^_^ Chappies! Yay!!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 16:41 CST
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Ok. I just caught up the last three chapters. So, the Gundams getting destroyed was just Horrible! I thought this was post-EW, so I thought that they had already went through that particular heart-ache, but, alas, no. Oh well, it made for good angst. And I really think that Relena IS an idiot! I can't wait till it bites her in the ass. I really liked the court scene. And the uniforms sound yummy. ^_~ I Love how they all get to live at the royal 'Hunting Lodge'. And the broken bed..*snicker*..nice touch. I laughed through that whole scene! I know they all saw the Leo from before, but I bet they weren't expecting to ever see it again. I can bet they were Hoping not to. I'll be looking forward to seeing them work on it and what happens next; they work well together. And Quatre, what's he up to? You have my curiosity truly peaked. Gundanium obsolete..? And he's out of contact...uh-huh..Really Curious now. Btw, the scene where he told Jess off was hilarious! Waiting for the next chappie! Happy Holidays! ~NekuYasha
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Title: the price they paid
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all thanks to you and our beta for putting out another chapter before Christmas. I realize that alot of people are busy with things around this time of year so it is very much appreciated. It is nice to see that Heero and Zechs have been freed even if they have some restrictions as to where they may go. Now we may be able to see a little bit more of a development in Wufei and Zechs relationship. I don't expect them to run and jump into anything, but I do expect for them to get to know ezch other a bit better and perhaps share their first kiss? Also, I wonder myself exactly what Relena had to promise in order to get this reprieve for Heero and Zechs? Well, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter soon and I hope that you guys enjoy your holidays and stay safe.
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Title: the price they paid
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all thanks to you and our beta for putting out another chapter before Christmas. I realize that alot of people are busy with things around this time of year so it is very much appreciated. It is nice to see that Heero and Zechs have been freed even if they have some restrictions as to where they may go. Now we may be able to see a little bit more of a development in Wufei and Zechs relationship. I don't expect them to run and jump into anything, but I do expect for them to get to know ezch other a bit better and perhaps share their first kiss? Also, I wonder myself exactly what Relena had to promise in order to get this reprieve for Heero and Zechs? Well, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter soon and I hope that you guys enjoy your holidays and stay safe.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy not signed in On: December 10, 2005 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is great! Please keep going! No more Gundams... poor boys!
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Title: hmmmm
Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
well believe it or not read all 22 chaps in a day....yea exam time :( but the story line is okay so far i guess but the fluff is getting to me. First it was cute in the beginning but then it was just being over done. Then my next query is this how in heavens did wufei just jump in, in comforting Zechs? I mean even Duo had quick thoughts upon seeing him a mean the guy was there enemy. I like the pairings yes, but it's like weird everybody is just buddy buddy and Trowa is all expressive and talkative without therapy everybody's breaking down,playing music. I dunno, it's weird. But for some strange reason the story is good.A guess it just grows on you. Keep writing.
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