| "A Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: Passerby_Dyl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. Absulutely fantastic. I was a bit confused at the end of Chap. 10 though. I really didnt understand lol.
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Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading this story (though I've just finnished it) and I really hope that you will be inspired to go on. Even tho seeing a het story was encouragement enough, I was glad that you gave Naruto a place to feel loved and secure. I am happy that none of the girls who loved Nar were demonized and I'll read regardless of who he ends up with because this is your story. I really want to see Sasuke and the aftermath of the leaf village. Sakura and Hinata's father should be brought to some justice.
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Title: kewl!
Reviewed By: il0vematsujun [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the story! but i was kinda confused on some parts.. like the picture/flyer thing? what was that about? @__@ nonetheless, great story!
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome! loving this fic to bits hope you update soon its torture not knowing whats gonna happen pls pls PLS update soon
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep reading this over and over again. Update soon and continue this awesome story.
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Title: Update!
Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. I'm a little disappointed that you killed of Temari, but the story is still good. I hope you keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Suzerain [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo! I took your suggestion and read this story. Had to create a profile. It's identical to my other one... Anyhow, nice story. I'll trust you with that Temari thing. Sasuke has found Naruto eh? Well, I can safely say that after being in a coma, he can't be better than Naruto. Can he? I dunno. Well, the important thing is that he'll defend his new village. Whatever the deal is with Temari, I hope she comes back soon. Naruto needs her. *shrugs* That sounded good in my head. Now it sounds corny. Apparently I have to explain my ratings. Well, I love your style of writing, there were a few spelling and grammer mistakes, Naruto leaving with Temari and having her 'die' at some point I have seen before (don't know if you have) but other than that it is completly original (I love how the other 3 followed), and for the final 2 ratings, I believe them to be self explanatory. Well I'll be eagerly looking for an update sometime soon, should you actually continue this. ^_^ And the lemons were nice too. ;) Don'y think I forgot about them. Oh no.
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Reviewed By: granpa sengir [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAH! please update the story T_T please please please i beg you please update this masterpiece. T_T
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Title: GOD BEEP IT
Reviewed By: DarkDragonFireSprit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CANT BELIEVE U THAT MAKES ME SO PISSED THAT TEMARI DIED AND NOW NOW OF ALL TIMES U CHOOSE TO END AS A CLIFF HANGER PLZ FOR THE SAKE OF GOD UPDATE. Man i should have played that closer to the vest!
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Reviewed By: Dragonkiller [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
INCREDIBLE the story is fantastic but a shame temari was killed or are you just foolong with us plz plz update soon
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Title: why
Reviewed By: The Judge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why did you have to kill Temari? that part made me want to cry. the story is one of the best i have read, but you shouldn't have killed her off.
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Reviewed By: Marduk69 On: October 02, 2005 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ZOMG, please continue, I love this au, it works so well. Seriously, this story has me hooked, I dont want another realy good plot driven fanfic I like, to disapear. If you dont continue, may the majority of your milk you drink be expired!
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Reviewed By: KageChidori [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 19:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
why does temari have to die? :(
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Reviewed By: Ransumi & Narumari Fan On: September 28, 2005 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff. =] It's good ta know Temari is still alive. Can't wait for them to reunite and live happily ever after. Keep up the good work. =D
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Reviewed By: NaruTema Fan On: September 27, 2005 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most of my enjoyment of the story was lost in these last couple of chapters. I only read the story because it was Naruto x Temari. I thought the "lemon" was an addition, like an extra tag that said sex would probably be involve. If I'd known it just meant there was NaruTema lemon bits, but that wasn't going to be the final pairing I wouldn't have wasted my time. It was a great story up until she died, and I'll probably check the next chapter to see if she somehow managed to get out or something. I'm thinking that MAYBE Sasuke took her, or something. I'm not holding my breath though, because right now it really feels like this is aiming for Naruto and Hinata to pair off. So with Temari gone (maybe permanently) almost all of my interest in this story is now dead. I'm not a fan of NaruHina stories. Since Temari is now dead, and it looks like Ino is next up on the "list," I can only guess she'll probably die or bow out, too. That way the road is paved for Hinata to get her long awaited "chance." I don't know if you're a NaruHina person or not, but I'm really getting that impression from the way this story has turned. Which is probably WHY most of my interest died, because right now it seems like you're trying to force Naruto down a road where Hinata will be a viable love interest for him. He doesn't see her, until those he loves are gone. Then she comes in and soothes his broken heart? Feh. I'd rather Temari live. :P The NaruTema Fan (get it? :D)
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