| "Fly Away Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: April 01, 2005 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw! Poor Fei, that idiot is stalking him even in his dreams! I can't wait to see what happens between 'Fei and Treize next! Update soon! -Till Then, auf wiedersehen!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 14:00 CST
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I'm back!Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while work has been a bit hectic.Sometimes you just can't stand your customers.Anyway I've still been reading and I'm looking forward to the party.This chapter was really cute but I can't see Heero watching Sailor Moon.I can picture him blowing away the TV to help kill Sailor Moon but watching it no can't see that.Then again its not like he could say Gundam Wing.Ahh sorry got of track please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 28, 2005 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw! Wufei's fallin in love! Will 'Fei's ex ever show up again? And I can't wait to see what will happen at the party! Update soon! -Till Then, auf wiedersehen!
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 25, 2005 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As much as I'd like to see a lime soon, I think it should be done after or during the party. If it's done sooner I think it would be moving it too fast. Will Wufei's doubts get in the way of him and Trieze? I also like all the lip-locking action this chapter! Update soon! - Till Then! auf wiedersehen! P.S. I'm glad you like my fics! You're the only one that seems to, but hopefully I'll find my inspiration again for it!
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 24, 2005 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe! Cute! I can't wait to see what happens at the party! Update soon! - Till Then, auf wiedersehen! P.S. Thanks for the review on my story!
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 23, 2005 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha! That was great! I bet we'd all love to see 'Fei in nothin but a towel and some drops of water *wink*. I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! -Till Then, auf wiedersehen! P.S. You put this chapter up twice, It's up as a prologue at the begining, you might want to take it down. (I only know because that's the link i recieved the first time)
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 22, 2005 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh! A party! yay! That would be funny to see Trieze jump out of the cake... 'Fei licking the frosting off.. *cough* back on track now. I can't wait to see what happens at the party! I bet it'll be exciting! Update soon! -Till Then, auf wiedersehen!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 07:12 CST
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Ya more fic.I can't wait for you to continue.You ask for your readers advice so here it goes.I think that you should wrap the scene up with Duo walking away with blood on his knuckles or something like that.I don't think you need a big fight scence unless you like the idea best.I really want to get to Wufei and Trieze and see how things develope and how Trieze gets Wufei to accept his love.Love the part about the choker, bet Wufei will be surprised.More soon please.
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 21, 2005 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Duo caught the jerk! You should just write out the last thing Duo does to him, like knock him out, threaten him, and walk away. I don't think you need to write a whole scene of him getting his butt kicked. (even though that'd be cool too!) Is Trieze going to get that for 'Fei?! He'd be so shocked! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! - Till Then, Auf Wiedersehen!
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 19, 2005 10:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! some 13x5 action going on finally! I can't wait to see what Duo and Heero do next! Update soon! -Till Then!
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Reviewed By: SilverRayne On: March 17, 2005 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. Keep the story going. I'm curious to know what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 17, 2005 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! Some butt kicking! w00t! Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what else trieze does! Update soon! -Till Then! P.S. Happy Birthday!
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Title: ch.9
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 16, 2005 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, Mystery solved! I wonder what those two will do to poor 'Fei! I can't wait to see trieze over protected side for him (if there is going to be one, lol) Update soon! - Till Then!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 12:49 CST
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All this review and I'll write faster makes me feel like a hostage.But I'm a very happy hostage.I cant wait to read more about Wufei and his life growing up.Of course I'm looking forward to the little creep getting what he deserves.This story is getting more into the character of Wufei and makes you just want to read more.But if I were Wufei I might hide in my room for a few days it seems safer.
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Title: ch.8
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 15, 2005 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw! Poor Wufei! Will he get even more depressed once he sees Heero and Duo together? Or will Trieze magically show up? Also, Wufei is Chinese, so how would he know Japanese? Just wondering! Update soon! -Till Then!
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