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Reviewed By: Tatsume On: June 30, 2008 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am absolutely enthralled. Even though the characters are OOC, it doesn't ruin the plot at all. What I found here was something so powerful, tender, sweet, outrageous and absolutely hot. My mind cannot push for edition for I found it to be absolutely breath-taking. Although I found myself wanting to know what the heck did Duo and his company did to the two "bad" guys. The courtship of Treize to Wufei was just sweet. Although, the flower thing was a classic, originality was inputted. And that makes it special. Each smiles that Wufei gives out are just so sweet. And a shy Heero...it wasn't what I expected but that just makes it endearing. And whew, Duo fashion sense are just to die for. That man have the "eyes". I am to also explain my reasoning for rating. I think I did the originality and enjoyment already so I'll start off with style. There is nothing I really have a complaint off. It was just the fact that the chapters were rather short that gave it a nine. But I enjoy it though. I got through it fast and makes me have an easier time to keep track of where I am and makes me anticipate the next chapter more. I was so disappointed when the "FLASHDRIVE OF WONDER" was lost. I hope to see how things would go from there. The spelling and grammar was good. I am not a grammar person and never ask me to do editing and revision because chances are that there won't be much done. I just plain sucks at it. But the spelling was good. If there were any spelling mistakes, I didn't catch any. Why I gave it a nine is something I don't know. I mean all can't be perfect right. Perhaps I did it just to even things out. And obviously, the overall rating just have to be a ten. I mean, come on, it is just that good. Treize is like my ideal man here though I wouldn't mind taking Wufei, Duo and Heero. Heck, I'll take Quatre and Trowa too, if I can. And the K-dude and Jackie are exactly the kind of people I hate and resent to the uttermost part of my mind. However, I do wonder if Jackie was a prostitute because of that scene where he said he got his "connection" because of being something. That also bring up the question, how did the K-dude manage to charm Wufei. Man, that guy must have some words on him. And not in a good way.
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Reviewed By: kou haruko@ On: February 04, 2007 00:48 CST
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(man i'm so lazy i dun wanna log in LOL) WUCHAN YOU"RE NOT UGLY! YOU"RE NOT PLAIN! WUCHAN UR TOTALLY SEXY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your dark eyes are so shiny and seductive! ur dark hair shines int he sun!!!!!!!!!! *goes back to reading more chapters* (how i love me 5x13 fics!)
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 18:12 CST
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I love your fic and I hope you continue. Laters!
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Title: C-kno-EBIL?
Reviewed By: TuhDaaa On: June 26, 2006 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic, beautifully written. Anythign from my favorite pairing is a godsend. I think You killed my browser though...After *38* Chapters it kind've went into cardiac arrest...and *OW* carpel Tunel
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Title: Oh no!
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus and Skeller-bvvt On: April 20, 2006 18:02 CDT
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The problem with such small memory disks is they are far easier to misplace and a great deal easier to steal. I love this fic, it has a certain... adorable...loving quality to it that just makes me what to curl up under the coves with Skells and read more. Alack, just as we got relaxed and enjoyed and short, but cute, lemon it ended. AHH! At least you have a good reason >.< Here's to hoping for the return of the flashdrive! Love Pyro and Skeller.
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Reviewed By: LW On: April 18, 2006 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I'm still here but....I lost my flashdrive that has all of my fics on it therefore updating may take a while. I'm working hard to both find the missing flashdrive and/or work from scratch. gomen to all, i'll update when i can." you poor dear writer I know how it feels to loose one did you lose it inside the house or outside of the house? look hard and you will find it! "YOU CAN DO IT" if loss outside well lets hope the the loss posters and a small reward will help. get friends to help
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Reviewed By: Scarlett/Zoe On: March 11, 2006 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, *grins* brilliant fic. Absolutly BRILLIANT !!! I absolutly love it. Wayyyy too good, thnks for Quatre n Trowa making an appearance. I loved it. *glomps* lol *blushes* i get a lil carried away a times. I love the kitty, and the fireworks very nice. *drools* and Zechs yummy. Lol a perfect fic. Absolulty perfect.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 20:45 CST
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Ahem. Now that that's out of the way, onto my favourite moments: ***I liked seeing Jackie running away as fast as he legs could carry him. He's a wuss who deserves to be slaughtered.***The confession of love. How adorable.***Kordairo kissing Treize - only because I knew good things *cough* tortureofKordario *cough* was to come ^_^***Duo being protective***Seeing Quatre and Trowa making a guest appearance.lol.***And finally, all of the limey bits.*** Great work!
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 20:45 CST
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Oh my goodness, I'm terribly, terribly sorry Nita. I was following this story quite religiously and I swear I put you into my author alerts thingy, but then I got distracted with uni, and the author alerts wasn't alerting me to your updates and I must have forgotten about this fic. Which is a horrible thing of me to do since it's quite an interesting fic! I've been sitting here reading from chapter 15 all of the way to chapter 37 in one sitting which actually is wonderful for me because I don't have to wait for updates, but which isn't quite so wonderful for you because I disappeared on you. I got up to chapter 19 and saw your note wondering where I was. I'm a bad, bad person! I spend all of my time haunting ffnet because I can get to Wufei fics right away but I rarely peruse the MMorg database. I was bored today so I thought I'd go check out the fics here to see if there were any good ones. I found this one and was reading through the fic wondering why it sounded so familiar and I remembered! Please accept my deepest apologies!!!
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: November 20, 2005 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw! The end was cute, and a wonderful lemon! It was a great end to this and I can't wait to see what comes next! I hope you get inspired soon! ^_^ -Till next time!
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Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 19:22 CST
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Up date soon! I want more!!!!! Please? This is so awsome.
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Reviewed By: Rori Barton On: October 31, 2005 02:15 CST
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I..loved it! Rawr! I hope you update soon, I'll be checking back on this fic often to find out. It's really well done and, beta'ed or not you have very little to worry about. I'm normally a stickler for grammar and spelling but you do great without a beta reader. And..and..I loved it. Please continue soon.
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey why is chap 36 and 37 the same?? well besides that major error.............this story is really good keep it up...........u have some grammatical errors which really disturbs the flow of the story. so if you have the time read through the previous chapters while you still can and make those corrections. Update soon :)
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Title: Sooooo Cute!!!!
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 00:57 CDT
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Gomen, but I don't do ratings until the end of a story. I love the cute 5x13 action going on there. Fei in my head says he likes the clothes you are putting him in and to update soon so he and Treize can be screwing like bunnies like they are in my head. Write again soon please!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 14:01 CDT
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Go Fei!Love when Wufei is a tease cant wait for the lemon so update soon.
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