| "Fly Away Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith (nsi) On: March 10, 2005 00:49 CST
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Is there any reason why there is a big chunk of space in the middle? Is it really supposed to follow like this or is my computer hacking up? --x--**Wufei scowled at the IM box. Maxwell knew better than to instant mail him in the middle of work.** Next sentence is... **When no other reply was sent, Wufei assumed that he had deturred the braided baka from any further groveling. He was wrong.** --x-- I can't wait to see the partying!
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Title: ch.2
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind ( still not logged in) On: March 09, 2005 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw! 'Fei's moping about? I wonder what he's going to do to change it. It's great that your updating a lot, even though they are short. I can't wait till you update again! - Till Then!
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 14:50 CST
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That's so funny. It's really quite typical of Duo to pick something so unsuitable for Wufei. But I can imagine it, and the image of Wufei with a gang member type brace just makes me want to crack up. --X-- That total creep! Friends with benefits, I'm looking forward to when you do something real nasty to him. --X-- Also, I hope you'll write a lemon. I'll look forward to it. --X-- I'm hoping that eventually Wufei'll stop being a cry baby. I'd rather he got angry, then I wouldn't feel sorry for him, lol, (or is that too stereotypical Wufei? Anyway, you write him how you want to, don't mind me, just sticking my nose where it really doesn't belong.) Anyway, another good chapter and you're updating quickly too so that's pretty great as well.
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Title: ch.1
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (too lazy to login) On: March 08, 2005 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Wufei has really decided to give up... I can't wait till he meets trieze! I bet it will be interesting. Updat soon! - Till Then!
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I really like this idea. It's great. Pity Wufei's last boyfriend dumped him just because he got him into bed. Oh well. Can't wait to see the 5x13 action, and I'm assuming this is AU? Hope you'll update soon.
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Title: prologue
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome so far. I love how you wrote Wufei's angst and emotions. I think he's really in character. I hope you update this soon! I'll be looking for it! - Till Then!
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