| "Fly Away Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 22:21 CDT
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I love your story! I don't think it was too soon for the lime or well what ever it was. It's going at a nice pace or well that is my opinion. Please write another chapter soon!
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Title: Not quite finished...
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 20:09 CDT
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oh, and I'm glad that you did that to Kortairo, and I hope Jackie and him get their come-uppance soon... (think of this quote. "You know, Benny, nasty little boys like you always get their comeuppance." "They do?" "Always." ... "Goodbye Benny.") Yep, that should work. meow, (insert paw print here)
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Title: I'M BAAAAAACK!!!!
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 20:06 CDT
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Heylo! i sorry! i got blocked from this site for a longo timo! But I'm back now, and all is riht with the world. I appreciate that I am a jewelry company... And that was almost a dirty trick, that last chapter... but i forgive you. meow, (insert paw print here)
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Reviewed By: LiTa Starwind (nsi) On: June 12, 2005 22:17 CDT
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w00t! A Lime! Will there be more 'Fei angst in the future? Or will it be fluf till the end? Update soon! - Till Then!
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: June 11, 2005 23:23 CDT
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Yay! Lime next update! I can't wait to see how Wufei responds to Trieze! Update soon! - Till Then!
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: May 25, 2005 14:15 CDT
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ew... spiders. I don't bame 'fei for hating them, nasty little buggers. lol! Good chapter! Update soon! - Till Then!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 12:01 CDT
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Hi again! I liked the new chapter and I'm glad I'm not the only one afraid of spiders .Ewww anyway looking forward to the date and hoping for some action.
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Reviewed By: coolmorphs On: May 11, 2005 20:59 CDT
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"A/N: Another floppy died today. That particular piece of shit held my 26th chap for this fic." Have you heard of a **USB drive**? you could hold more than just one part/chapter on it & even more than one story at a time. Than you can write an arc!
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Reviewed By: spaceprincess18 On: May 10, 2005 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story, and I think it has great potential. Please keep that in mind when I say that your presentation would be greatly improved if you had someone check you grammar and spelling before you posted the chapters. If it's not to presumptuous of me, I wouldn't mind giving your chapters a once-over. e-mail me at spaceprincess18@yahoo.com if you are interested. Again, your plot line is excellent and this story really has potential.
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 12:39 CDT
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Yay Wufei gets another chance.I loved Duo and I really loved the fact that the guy wet himself that was just great.Write more soon
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: May 08, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo was awesome! I love how he threatend Kordairo! I can't wait to see what happens next! -Till Then, auf wiedersehen!
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Reviewed By: Foxy Grandpa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 23:53 CDT
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Holy crap, is Duo insane? o_o; They're a little over-zelous for me, seriously n_n; Majorly soap-opera.. I mean, irl Kordiro would've given up a long time ago and just went on with his whoreh life-style O_. No one is ever so intent on ruining someone's life, unless they actually did something awful... But, whatever 'o' I still like your fanfic xD;
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Reviewed By: LIta Starwind (nsi) On: May 07, 2005 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! They got back together! And Duo's going after him! w00t! I can't wait to see what happens next! Will Wufei now be even more insecure around treize? I can't wait to find out! Update soon! And can you fix the chapter before the new one? It's all one big paragraph and it's extremely hard to read. Thanks! -Till then auf wiedersehen!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 18:22 CDT
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Loved the GG character.She sounds like a relative that Wufei would have.I hope that Trieze can smooth things over without making things worse.I cant wait to see what Duo and Heero do to that guy either.Please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 14:47 CDT
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Why must Wufei suffer so?Cause it just makes a good story.Ahmmm ,sorry Wufei but angst looks good on ya.Well thats all the stupid stuff I'm writing for this review.Keep going cant wait to see how you fix this mess.
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