| "Fallen Through" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 14:20 CDT
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please update ur story!
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Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 14:19 CDT
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This is a wonderful story! Please update right away! ^-^
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Title: Love It!
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 18:29 CDT
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I love it so far! Please update!
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chap maddy keep em comin. i really like them. AND I LOOK FORWARD TO A GOOD STORY WHEN I COME BACK FROM A VEEY SAD DAY.
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh god. poor ryou. what did karasu do..? not bad. that was funny in a weird twisted way.hmmm haha. hope you get more chaps out ill be waiting! so keep em comin
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 17:14 CDT
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On the new chapter, WOW. That was really good. Ryou's really freaked. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: cool_as ice On: August 02, 2005 16:30 CDT
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are ryou, bakura, and kurama ever going back to the human world? this plot almost makes all OOC. plaesae tell you will let them go home? Yomi is an old man!! let them all go (yugi is going to be sad at you if his friends don't come home) and an no fighting kurama is boring ( we all know k-chan is his hotest when he is kicking butt in a rose-filled way)
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what happend to ryou. y he not in here, lol. oh well i wonder what itsuki ganna do. its a cliff hanger! haha. have ther been any and i have not notices ya. i bet im just to stupid it see em. keep the chaps comin plz and ty
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha finaly. took bakura long to do that. haha, love it, just love it. and sorry i have been gone for 6 days i went to see my grandma. haha so im back now. haha. keep those chaps comin cause ther good
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 28, 2005 19:43 CDT
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yay u updated, update soon lol that was kinda short, I wanna see what happened to Bakura-kun and Yomi-chan!!!
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Reviewed By: Dreamweaver77 On: July 28, 2005 19:15 CDT
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what happens to ryou? is he all alone!! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 22, 2005 20:48 CDT
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Aww poor Karasu lol he's gonna end up sexually frustrated. FINALLY! bakura stopped trying to get away, i was surprised that he said i love you though. Shorter than your other one...hint hint...Hope to see another one soon
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Title: update!
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon!
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Title: About time...
Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 17, 2005 23:12 CDT
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finally you put Bakura in there, poor Kura-chan, Yomi-kun hit him, what an asshole! lol Kurama's hilarious, you don't know how hard I laughed at his situation. Hmmm what's going on with itsuki, well update soon! p.s. Bakura is pissing me off, lol he needs to stop hurting himself and/or stop trying to escape o.O
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thi is like torture. lol. but you know my rants. haha. plz maddy get on msn im rally getin bord now. good chap and keep em comin
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