| "Fallen Through" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Title: luv the new chapter
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 13:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep up the good work....i always look forward to reading a new chapter from you
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 15, 2005 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! i just read your last two chapter, about time you got some more Kurama/Karasu stuff in there, and what about Kura-chan and Yomi? Can u pwease put him in the next chappie? .:looks hopeful:. Well bye now
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Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 12:20 CDT
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i luv ur new chapters!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: IceAngel's Hikari On: July 15, 2005 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good I like it a lot but it needs more Ryou drama if you ask mE.
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
did karasu do what i think he did. * oh karasu!* karasu:ya me:you do know what im ganna do to you now and y ,right? karasu: umm yes and..*gulp yes... lol good chap poor poor ryou oh ya and kurama.update soon so i can se what happens next. and see who kills who. lol oh ya and maddy im ganna be workin extra shives on sundays now so i wont be on as often any more but i will be on and plz dp up date. ty. haha. i have lots of stuff to tell ya.
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awe man i thot karasu would be out forever. o well.nothin i can do. and now i hate karasueven more if it possible for..for.. *gulp* kidding kurama. im so ganna kill em. *taked out hally* karasu: oh gods! me:you basterd, youl pay!. any hoo plz hurry and update soon. lol *chases karasu around*
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Reviewed By: Dreamweaver77 On: July 10, 2005 22:32 CDT
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poor ryou!!! another good chappie!!! please update soon.
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Reviewed By: SilverRayne On: July 10, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd love it if you could add Karasu in the story! I love the Karasu-Kurama tension. Maybe later on in the fic you could add a tension between Karasu-Kurama-Ryou?
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 08, 2005 21:45 CDT
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hmm...good chapter, and now i have no clue who you're talking about, interesting, update soon!
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
maddy im quiting soccer and ww. *sniff sniff*. im scared silly. im soooo ganna die!!!. and very good job on the fic. i really like it.
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 06, 2005 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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lol Kura-chan is funny, update soon, I can't get enough of this story!
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Reviewed By: Pai_3x3 On: July 03, 2005 15:23 CDT
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I love your story, it's so much fun. You do a really good job on updating regularly, so keep that up and update soon.
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. good chap. and y arnt you on msn any more maddy. i miss ya. i get on and your not on. i get soooo bord!!! but if ya readin this get on soon and update too.
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 12:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi! ^^ The sentences are better, but I have one thing: When you say 'minuet', you SHOULD say 'minute'. OKay? ^^0 That just bothers me, for some reason. I don't know why. Anwyway, update soon, okay? ^^ Yay for K/K!! *waves Karasu/Kurama flag around. sticks tongue out at velox fox kit.* Karasus is wonderful!! ^^ No one else seems to think so, though...*sniffles.* Why does everyone hate him so much? Anyway, this is cool, so, like, update. ^^
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
verey good but this is soooo looking like a ryou/kurama.haha i love this chap. dang ryou got scared. and who was that one guy. the one who told ryou about youko
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