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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 15:02 CDT
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um.. just an FYI, you're lableing the chapters a chapter early, like 40 is labled 41
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 19:52 CDT
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i really like the story, its gotten me really interested in YYH, and i love where the storys goin, please update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chap.tho i still dont like the fact that karasu is still in. oh well i will suvive. i think. lol. any wyas plz update soon. it was really good
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: June 21, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I loooooooooooove this story somuch, it took me like an hour to read the whole thing. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: wingweaver On: June 19, 2005 21:00 CDT
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Good story!! I wonders whats will happens to ryou and whens will he knows whats he is. Pwetty pwetty please update soon^_^
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww poor ryou is sick. sorry i have not been on but i had soccer to day and i had to go to my moms friends house. so ill try to get on then i get back from oceans of fun. and very good chap. i felt the vid goin in this one. ill talk to ya later maddy. ja
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 13:12 CDT
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i thought the latest chapter was cool. i felt kinda bad for karasu, letting kurama go... i cant wait to see what happens next ^_^
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dangit. i has hopeing that karasu would die. oh well now that hes out of the pic.lol. im so sorry i have not been on iv been soooo busy. lol. with wwcm, and work. but now im on and really wanting to read the fic. lol. so like i have said before.... HURRY!!!lol
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, you updated at just the right time because i needed something to read.
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 16:34 CDT
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your latest chapter was really good. plz continue. I cant wait to see Hiei and Karasu fight... i think it'll be funny whoever wins.
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh hell ya. go hiei. thats one of the only times ill cheer for hiei, any hoo. hiei you better win or ill whoop you butt if your still alive. kurama and ryou dont want to be with hentai karasu..lol nice story im really lovein it.cant wait to see what happens. so you get it out soon ya gat that. lol. this one was really funny for me. talk to ya later maddy
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 20:20 CDT
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sorry im not any more but. with the wonder work shop im so busy. ill try to get on more to read you chaps im always trin to, but my brother that i hate so much wont ever let me on. any who. i love this chap. good work on it.lol, poor kurama, if karasu so much as makes one move on kurama, im ganna kill him. " you hear me karasu, im ganna kill you, hentai" lol. ok hope you get your chap out. and plz hurry with this one too. hehe. ja
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 15:42 CDT
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The latest chapter was really interesting. i dont know whats gonna happen to Bakura, or Ryou, or ANYBODY! i like your style.
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh boy. yami is way over his with yomi.lol. good fic. the best so far. bakura got in the way of kurama telling ryou. man, lol.plz hurry with the chaps i love em all. a read em twice too. lol.thats how much o love this story. ja
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Reviewed By: Goddess_writer625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Indeed, everything is so going great! It's obvious that Hiei loves Kurama! Hiei X Kurama! ^__^ Anyways, please update soon!
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