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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one here. good idea. and you sound so much like jin. cant wait to see what hiei does. hmm i wonder what would happen if hiei found out about karasu likeing kurama.... lol. hope ya get your next chap out soon. ja
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 22:22 CDT
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^^ Update. The chappie is misnumbered, though. It's thirty-nine, and you said it was forty. ^^
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im really happy with your fic. likr i think iv said yours is the best. and if ya cant remember this is alexis. i cant waut to see your other chap. you no my i get bord easy so im still waiy=tin for ya.lol. i told a friend about your story i tell her how you get here she might read it. i dont know. ja
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Title: Totally Awesome Story
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love ur story!!!! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOVVVVEEEE this story! It's soooooo cool! Please update!
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Reviewed By: Goddess_writer625 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, sorry ain't here again...I got...problems...anyways, everyhting's going good, please update!
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey thats a good fanfic you made.tho i dont like karasu i still read it ,and i think you shuold make a kurma/ryou thing if this is one but it seems more like a karasu/kurama one. so plz plz plz make a ryou/kurama one for me. if this is already one email me. crazy_alexis_1993@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 13:56 CDT
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^^ The choppiness is starting to go. However, it would flow better if the paragraphs were longer. I mean, you only need a new paragraph every, say, seven sentences, and whenever someone new speaks, so that leaves alot of room for long paragraphs, and that helps the story. Kurama, be nice to Kara-chan!! He loves you!! Mean ol' Kurama...*pouts.* ^^ Update soon, 'kay? Oh, I updated Pure Insanity...Couldja read the newest chappie?
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Reviewed By: Goddess_writer625 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey sorry, i havent been around. Anyways, it was so cool! I mean Kurama said Karasu was his mate! That is so cool! Wait, not cool! Well...i dont know! Anyways, please update! Even thought you might not have many reviews, its the many people that reads your fic. Thats important
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 16:00 CDT
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Kurama, you are so mean to poor Kara-chan!!! Be nice already!! Yeesh!! I mean, he could enslave you and rape you if he wanted, but no, he's being nice!! Return the favor!! ......Sorry....^^0 I'm a rabid Karasu-fan. Bwahaha...Anyway, update soon, okay? Sorry I didn't review in so long, I was momentarily obsessed with Yu-Gi-Oh!, so, yeah...Update soon. Oh, and could you review Pure Insanity? It's got, like, five chappies....
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Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.O NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! RYOU! OMG! THEY REALLY ARE BROTHERS?! And is this really a Karasu/Kurama fic or Kyrama/Hiei fic? Oh well, update![One more thing, Goddess_writer625 emailed me the last week and told me to tell you sorry that she haven't been reivewing. She was in a holiday for about a month and she said UPDATE!]
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 21:55 CDT
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Poor Kara-chan...Kurama's so mean to him. Karasu: Not like I care.... Me: Whatever. We all know you love him. Anyway, it's good. Still a bit choppy, and you should work on not saying people's names so much...Vary a bit on sentence structure. ^^ Other than that, it's really good. UPdate soon, 'kay?
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Reviewed By: yamiyugikun [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 21:08 CDT
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Hi Foxgirl! Thank you for reviewing my fic. I've never read a Yuyu Hakusho/Yugioh cross before. Most crossovers are Yuyu Hakusho/Inu Yasha. It's great that you wrote something different. Please update! There's a few mispellings that need to be fixed, but other than that its good.
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Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOLIES!! So cool! I hope they read Kurama's letter! Riz: Hope that Kurama is already healed, anyways, UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 16:28 CDT
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Shacel: YES! Kurama's healed! WAHOOO!!!/ Riz: AAAHHH!! ROYU MUST BE SO KAWAII FROM BEING A KITSUNE!/ Shacel: HE IS!!!/ Riz: PLEEEEAAASSSSEEEE!! UPDATE! MORE, MORE CHAPPIES! *ahems* sorry, ^^ i'm always hyperestic, anyways, update!
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