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Title: Great!!!
Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is just fucking great! I can´t believe you have so few reviews, seems there are just too many kids here who likes the stories with the same old fucking plot (Kagome sees Inu with Kikyou, runs into Sesshoumaru and they suddenly fall in love and have sex). This story has everything I´ve been missing in other fics, like an actual and original plot, Characters who are not too much OOC and finally a Kagome who didn´t forgive Inu immediately after he was so cruel to her. Some people really need to get real: Kagome is no angel, Kikyou is not evil but a complex character and Inu is not a bastard just an idiot. And as much as I love Kag/Sess pairings he would never fall in love with a human, neither with her nor with Rin (you don´t raise a child to fuck it later, that´s just sick!). I believe he will always be the lonly warrior and honestly, it fits him. But stories like yours are much more believable because you didn´t rush anything, in most fics the main pairings have already sex in the first chapters. That´s totally OOC for all of them! They even blush from holding hands people! Ugh.. sorry but someone had to say something. You have an amazing talent and I hope to read more of your fantastic work! Gambare!
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Title: Strange Duet
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 13:10 CST
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wow... talk about an emotional breakdown... maybe its PMS... man thatd suck... Well neways Love the story ^-^ Keep up the good work & update soon!
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Title: Strange Duet
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome or Sess, Kagome, and Inuyasha please?
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Reviewed By: Samurai-Musume [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed your story so far and hope that you will be continuing soon, please update ^.^ Tia
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 20:31 CST
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ALONE!?!? I wonder if Kikyo will be satisfied knowing Kagome's decision about her & Inu not being together in that way? And if Sesshomaru will be pleased about it. CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Title: Update Please?
Reviewed By: SoulsAir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 19:57 CST
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wow i really liked your story.. totally heartbreaking though ne? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 23:35 CST
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I loved it! I cant wait to fond out what will be said and how things will turn out for Kag & Inu. Also I wonder how Sesshomaru will act with Kagome back. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 11:35 CST
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Great chapter, a little confusing though. I cant wait to see what's in store for Kagome next. UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 17:27 CST
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Great chapter! Loved it! Update SOON!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 05:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ABSOLUTELY MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!! (switch from hyper excited fan to normal) Your writing is superb and has more refinment than most fanfic writers. This is a very enjoyable piece of writing. Please continue delivering such quality work. And may I say that it is a crime that you don't have more reviews. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: July 19, 2005 03:48 CDT
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I cant wait to read the next chapter. I really liked the dream sequences. Did they really happen? After all they said that time is in Kagome's blood. maybe traveling to the past through a dream? Eh prolly not, Sesshy would have remembered, right? Well newho keep up the good work & UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring (no signed in) On: July 12, 2005 11:35 CDT
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Hmmm. Protectress is not technically correct. The word protector is not gender specific. Neither is the englsish language so much like latin-based languages where almost every noun or adjictive needs a gender modifier.//// Personally, I think it's rather stupid and immature to add an -ess to words like author and protector. We already know you are talking about a female, and it makes no sense to try and emphasize that more by adding an unnecessary suffix.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: July 12, 2005 00:18 CDT
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i think you have a pretty good story here so far. As far as everyone being in character...seems like they are and if they are slightly off, im sure you did it on purpose. and sesshoumaru is a tough character to write...that cold emotionless mask hes got doesnt help a person figure out whats going on in that pretty head of his...keep up the good work and update soon... Ja Ne~ Darkflameangel(aka DFA)
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Reviewed By: DFA On: May 09, 2005 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darkflameangel here....to lazy to actually sign-in under my full pen name, but thought that your fic was more than worthy of a wonderful review...hmmm....it is very intriguing so far...plus having sesshoumaru in it is always good...you definately have got me guessing, so i dearly hope that you are going to update soon. if you ever need a beta to help you vent your frustrations on the story, feel free to ask me...but i suppose, since i cant find much to gush about tonight in regards to the fic, i shall give the ever present "Keep up the AWESOME work and update soon!" Darkflameangel
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