| "A Slave to No One" Reviews/Comments [ 182 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this is such a great fic and when i read that title and then the sum. i just had to read this fic...I really love how the story has gone and everthing..I can't wait to see what happenes at the end and eveything..One thing that makes me sad about this is that u did not put Sessy anywhere or mention him at all..i really hopeing to a little something about him..but alass nothing..well i'm glade that u had a good trip and i was in Florida not to long ago visiting my aunt..it was fun..sr that urs was all work..thought i'm sure that u will go back sometime and have a great time..best wishes and update soon!!! ^___^
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 21:51 CDT
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Great chapter can't wait to see the twist you've promised... Zirra
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Reviewed By: MasterFluffyGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 20:38 CDT
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This is one of the most creative fics I have ever read! And that is saying a lot for me because I have read tons of fics on many different sites. This one is defently on the top ten of most creative I've read! Keep it up. ~Cassie
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Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 01:23 CDT
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You have such a fantastic and orginial storyline. I absolutely love this story! Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 21:10 CDT
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OOOOOHHHHHH I LOVE IT!!!!! What will happen when Miroku shows Sango his demon form?!?!?! The suspense!!! Please update soon!!! And have fun on your trip!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My opinnion of this story is and always will be this one word: Perfect. That will most likely never change, fucking excellent story!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 19:28 CDT
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oooh, good kags dad said ok, and so did her mom. but what about the slave owners, and the slave trainers, they'll probably cause trouble, ooooo, this is going to be a long week, oh well, can't wait till you update, Zirra
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: cher On: April 17, 2005 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic,i hope you enjoy your bussiness trip i know how those things work , work and no fun lol *_* :) anyhow i cant wait to read more when you get back , i think that you should also post your stories on other fanfic sites as well, that is if you have not done that yet , but any how props for you! hope to read more of this great fanfic soon! Ja Ne for now from anime_fan141
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Reviewed By: DREAMY7__12 On: April 17, 2005 14:28 CDT
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i LOVE IT AND I CANT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTRER. THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ IN A WHILE...so plz update soon..
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Title: Dri
Reviewed By: Sapphira_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first fic I've read in, like, months! I'm so glad I read this and not something else 'cause it's really good.
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Reviewed By: sakurakessho (too lazy to log in) On: April 17, 2005 00:41 CDT
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Wah! I want the next chapter. I guess I'll have to wait until tomorrow, ne? You definately had Inuyasha in character in this chapter. And Shippo is great! I think i'm going to go to bed so that tomorrow can come sooner. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 00:37 CDT
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You say the Inu needed to be knocked down a notch.. That he was being stuborn.. But as was said in the story a few times his father never listoned to him and only told him what to do.. Why should Inu now all the suddon have unquestioning faith in his father expecully involving his Mate? well thats at least that i was thinking maybe i missed something but it just don't seem like all the peices are fitting together like you say they are Waiting on the next
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 23:21 CDT
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oooh no, what a perfectly evil place to end it, not that it was a cliffy, but i want more. Please update asap, i really want to know what is going to happen. bet inu and kags make a scene at the dinner. i don't know though so please(gezz i've said that twice now) update. Zirra (i can't believe you got me to say please twice)
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: April 16, 2005 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did i say this is excellent? I meant to say that this is FUCKING excellent, update REALLY soon or i'll find you and lynch you, okay? LOL.
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Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE IT AND I CANT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTRER. THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ IN A WHILE
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