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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 01:23 CDT
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I think I'll just wait for the spy to be revealed. otherwise I will never sleep. It seems like Inutaisho is really protective of Inuyasha and Kagome. He has reasons to be, but the poor kids are never gonna be alone. Ya know, it wouldn't be good for Kagome to blaqme herself, but she's gonna know when she gives birth thats theres more than one pup there. God, triplets. I'm guessing thats Inuyasha's dog influence on her, because triplets are not common at all. Another, long, wonderful chapter. I think some of your chapters are longer than other people's entire stories. Really, its quite possible.
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Reviewed By: jasko_lefey On: June 07, 2005 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I BELIVE THE TRATIOR IS MORKU OR ON OF THE HEALERS
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Reviewed By: Danchik On: June 05, 2005 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. One of the best I ever read. Congrats ;-)
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant(tired) On: June 03, 2005 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another briliant chapter, total kawaii. I love the ring idea, did u design it yourself or see it somewhere? if u thought of it u should design jewlery! ne way ttyl.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 00:34 CDT
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great chapter. *yawn* i'm tired so im gonna go, oh and what exactly is the Kama Sutra book?? i don't know. well see ya later, update asap, Zirra
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Title: Karma Sutra or Tantric?
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: May 30, 2005 16:28 CDT
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Are those the books she was talking about? and i dont remember if you have already said anything about him but is sessomuru going to be in this stry?
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Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: not login in On: May 29, 2005 05:39 CDT
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I the is book the joy of sex
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Reviewed By: Akihana... On: May 29, 2005 00:57 CDT
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I believe it is a Kama Sutra..or in the same category. Kagome does have a point. Why are people always trying ot kill them? It has got to get old at some point. So much hatred....kinda like the Middle East at this time. Ya know, this is really well written, especially for being in a second language. Hell, you write better in a second language than I do in my first. Great job, see ya soon.
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Title: Cool Story!!!!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter! As for the book, I think it shows all the different ways for a man and woman to do the horizontal tango! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 00:28 CDT
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I've been meaning to review, but I was never logged in..up till now! I lovet his story. The chapters are nice and long. Its such a change from the really short chapters. At times the writing is a little bit think and hard to read, but its alright otherwise. I think this fic is really original. Great job, and hope to see a new installment soon.
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: May 26, 2005 11:32 CDT
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good chappy! i love it ! yay! they are gonna have a puppy! an.. dosn't that sound wierd to anyone?
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 11:07 CDT
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grand chapter....can't wait for more. and i do hope you keep writing fanfiction, as your very good at it. well till next chapter, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Crescent moon walker On: May 25, 2005 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya!!!! I loved this chapter!!! They are going to have a baby!!!!!!! I wonder if it's a boy or girl? It'll be so cute!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: jman303 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 21:57 CDT
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i love the fic but i need more updates i like it i want it to keep going so if you can please try to update alot. is the other danger naraku. this fic is the Mother F***ing greatest jman303
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Reviewed By: ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it and i hope that u keep on writing. i love the way u write and all those ppl can can go to hell i think u are really great. p.s.( they can go to hell b/c thats were in going and i dont want to meet them so they can go to heven.) devils child
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